The Spreader of Truth

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Threnetos, Nov 14, 2013.

  1. And If I spy a singing bird, Ill snap its neck before its heard! -Cicero


    I dropped the girl in the ground carelessly, instantly checking her pants for her cellphone, which I managed to find and destroy. She looked at me with outmost fear, which actually flattered me and made me smile, then I grabbed her from the wrist and threw her to a rusty old metal chair. We were in a long forgotten factory, it was basically my secret lair, where I play with all my small trinkets at which today I would get to use! Oh merriment! Oh happiness! Oh excitement! I couldn't control myself, so I instantly got to work! I took out my two best buds, Bertha and Mary and stabbed them one in for each hand, nailing her to the chair. Oh her screams were music to my ears! I proceeded to feel the warm blood trickling down her hand and wipe it off all over her face. Oh how beautiful it looked on her, tears and everything! Just splendid! I then got out one of my first inventions! A finger cracker! At least thats how i called it, its a metal device in which you would press down and one bar would hold her finger up, while the other one pushed down! But you would have to click strong and fast! For if not, it wouldnt crack the finger at all, then what joy would be in that? I cracked two of her fingers and enjoyed more and more how her screams echoed the halls.

    "No one can hear you darling! Your stuck with me!" I told her with a toothy grin

    Her only response was to cry harder, so I grabbed a hammer and slammed it at Bertha's behind, making her dig deeper into her hand. Then I grabbed a big nail, those used for machines and with my hammer nailed it to her stomach. Oh it was so wonderful how she spat all her blood out of those lovely lips of her. Just as she was passing the see the horrible truth, I whispered in her ear

    "I love you"








    Ah love is a wonderful thing!
     
  2. Woah that was cruel....
    And



    AMAZING!!!!!!
     
  3. xD I got a dark mind
     
  4. Gruesome and slightly gory but I enjoyed reading this chapter.
     
  5. Since I havent put the warning Ill put it now



    This is a really gruesome story, I will keep on putting dark themes and such, so if you are not comfortable with this such stuff, I recommend you stop reading now
     
  6.  Interesting I I think I will keep reading 
     
  7. I love his insanity.
     
  8. Ben you scare me ?
     
  9. Eh, I think up some weird shiat Sam
     
  10. Yep, but its who I am
     
  11. Very interesting, pretty dark but that's okay.
     
  12. This is not worthy of the 2nd page, bump.
     
  13. Haha thanks Kira, but I dont think I should keep updating only 3-4 people read this xP
     
  14. (Im going to add something to Ben, a split personality! :D the other split is fun, crazy, wild and energetic and its flaw is that its reckless, putting himself in danger 90% of the time)
     
  15. 0.o Wrong thread?
     
  16. (Yup Wrong thread have not noticed up to now xD