HALLOWEEN ONESHOT CONTEST

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by tash777, Oct 31, 2013.

  1. No? ALRIGHTY THEN I'LL JUST POST MY POEM
     
  2. One day, it was a dark and stormy night
    Oh wait, that's the cliché -- it was actually rather bright
    Inside the very large estate
    Of the three Liponates

    The young daughter, named Eloise
    Was walking down the hall when she heard a noise
    A faint murmur, almost not even there
    So she moved a lot closer to hear

    Closer, closer, closer she walked
    Closer, closer, closer she stalked
    Fluorescent lights shone overhead
    Hardwood floors were lain down ahead

    The only thing that seemed out of place
    Were the pumpkins from the Halloween race
    These Jack O' Lanterns were almost the same color
    As Eloise's hair; just a bit duller

    Each pumpkin contained a dim light
    But it wasn't lit then; it wasn't yet night
    Eloise continued without making a sound
    Because in bandages, her feet were bound

    So were her arms, her torso and head
    She looked like a mummy, but it was because she bled
    Constantly, without stop, and there was no cure
    She had a disease that would eventually kill her

    The bandages were her only hope
    She knew her fate, and so she constantly moped
    What a terrible fate for the ten year old!
    How could her God be so bold?

    Eloise was alone; her parents were gone
    They were at a convention for mowing lawns
    She was by herself, but not for a while
    The event was in the local store's aisles

    She crept past the pumpkins to the room on the left
    Where the skeletons were stored, in a closet -- theft
    Was prevented by a lock on the door
    Eloise had the key and had locked it before

    But now, that door was rattling
    Something inside was battling
    Against the heavy wood to get out
    What could it be? Eloise gave a shout

    "No one is in there! No one at all!
    Only the skeletons and dust and the walls!"
    Fear coated her throat, heavy and slick
    When the bedroom door slammed shut with a click

    The room was filled with darkness; she struck
    At the door, but no luck, it was stuck
    She whirled around, and the pumpkins turned on
    "That's strange; I thought in here there were none!"

    Their glowing grins loomed in her mind
    The only source of light she could find
    Suddenly, the closet door opened with a thud
    And the skeletons walked out; it was like a flood

    There were so many more than what she had thought
    Double, triple, four times than what she had bought
    Skeletons can't multiply! Impossible!
    They can't walk, either! It's not plausible!


    Those incredulous thoughts ran through her head
    As she frantically backed towards the bed
    The skeletons continued, slowly but sure
    There were enough to soon surround her

    Eloise screeched loudly for help
    None came, and she continued to yelp
    She tripped, and a bandage ripped
    A bony hand closed over her lips

    Blood began to run over her eyes
    Blocking her vision like a disguise
    For the skeletons, who began
    To close in, so Eloise ran

    But Eloise didn't get very far
    Another one grabbed her, its grip quite on par
    She was trapped, with nowhere to go
    Her blood now covered her from head to toe

    The last thing she heard before she blacked
    Out, were her parents' cry of, "We're back!"
    Laqueesha and David walked up the stairs
    Carrying their bags of lawn mowing wares

    "Where's Eloise?" they wondered aloud
    As they went in the bedroom, whose closet was shroud
    In darkness, so they turned on the light
    And shrugged at the unordinary sight

    Skeletons were lined up, none out of place
    Wearing their witch hats from the volunteer race
    There were no traces of blood on the floor
    But on a skeleton farthest from the door

    There were bandages, but only a few
    Hanging from the small bones… they never knew
    They didn't notice the strange amount
    They didn't even have the idea to count

    They didn't see the one in the back
    Tiny, wig orange and witch hat black
    Skull frozen in a silent scream, and in bold text
    On a sign clutched in the bony fingers…
    "You're next."
     
  3. A/N: The way I read it, the rhythm and rhymes sounded perfect.
     
  4. GSHEJGWKDHDBGLSBXHEGV I LOVE IT
     
  5. Laqueesha and David omg 
     
  6. WHY THANK YOU and I knew you would. By the way, Laqueesha is a ghetto FEMALE in this poem.
     
  7. BUUUUUUUUUUUUMPPPPPPPPPP

    I'll be your official bumper.
     
  8. I'm tempted to join for I am the greatest writer out there hmm
     
  9. Bumperoni and cheese
     
  10. Anyone can join. Even you, SpitFire! :3
     
  11. Ooh, I'll join. :3
     
  12. Thrift Shop by Bumplemore ft. Bumpan Lewis
     
  13. I will be posting mine soon!
     
  14. I wanna join too
    But i have next to no idea at all 
    Imma post something if i get any ideas ???
     
  15. That's fine :3
     
  16. BUMP EVERYONE JOIN THIS CONTEST