Our Night

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  1. Trying this again




    Our Night
    Chpt. 1 First nightDannie's POV

    There's no way. None at all, this is never going to work. We're both crazy. Not going to happen. Like, ever. Well, it's not possible to live 185 years either but, what the hell right, screw logic and reasoning, right? Of course.

    'Never Gonna Dance Again' began to play. He's here. I slowly pad across the cement floor and up the cellar stairs. Down the hall and into the closet we call a mud room.

    'Cause Guilty Feet Have Got No Rhythm' the door bell chimmed for a second time. Have you ever just hated the sound of something? Well I sure did so I changed it.

    Slowly I approached the door. He's early. I really don't want to open it, really don't want him in my house.

    Alone.

    There's so much he could do. And so much I would let him.

    The door began pounded on the door.

    "I see you kido! Open up!" Bang, bang, bang. "This isn't a game, lets go!" Of course. He was always so dominant, possive.

    With deliberate ease I unlocked the deadbolt and slipped out of the door way, counting his breaths.

    1....2.....3.....and the door swong open. Great. Just looking at him I felt small, even with my above average 5'10, he was huge. At least a foot taller, and broad shoulders. With a particular brutish-grace he stepped in and had me against the wall with the door locked. I hadn't even blinked.

    "Ready?"
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    Thanks for reading, criticism is welcome, if you like it please let me know. Thanks.
     
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    God why was he so close? Our noses where practically touching, and his breath was warm and stressed. I hadn't even noticed that my arms where pinned over my head in one of his large hands.

    "Y-you said t-tomorrow" I stuttered.

    "And now it's today, I changed it" he muttered back.

    "Then your going to have to wait" I replied instantly as I looked back at him, straight into his beautiful grey-brown orbs.

    For a slight second I caught him roll his eyes. Oh that lovely eye roll. surely this won't be the last time I get it.

    Should be a fun trip, not. and yet we still put up with each other. I caught him glance at my wrists, counting. great. I thought he wouldn't notice.

    Stupid me.

    "Your not stupid" he murmured and rested his forehead on mine, eyes closed.

    How many times do I have to tell you that? when will you learn child? I knew you shouldn't be left alone" he sighed.

    "Then why'd you come if you didn't want to see?" I mange to say in the faintest whisper. He makes me feel so small. like a little kid. ridiculous. insane.

    "Yes, I am" he smirked.
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