Down-And-Out

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by iDontLikePeople2, Sep 22, 2013.

  1. I have made a start on the update! But first, I will update Spark!
     
  2. UPDATEEEEEE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UP TO THE FREAKING DATE
     
  3. I will update soon - I promise
     
  4.  I'm Back!  Thanks to Tash I got my old account back.

     Anyway Haha Brooke I got an idea for you.
     
  5. I promise promise promise there will be a lovely, long update for you guys today.
     
  6. This may be insulting but this is your first stpry i read and i like it so keep going
     
  7. so this is where you been hiding
     
  8. You didn't update yesterday like you promised
     
  9. Update!
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    I walk aimlessly down the streets of London, peering into shop windows, and smelling the food-filled aroma. I look down: my trainers are scruffy-looking already; my trousers are wet at the bottoms; and my stomach is rumbling evily. What I would give for a sandwich right now!

    After a while, my feet become sore, so I find myself a cosy shop doorway to sit in. I take my trainers off, only to find my feet covered in blisters. I sigh. I hate being homeless. I'd go back home... But I can't... I can't face it... What is he does it again? I shudder to think.

    I remember that day... I don't want to, but I do. Clear as day.

    I shake my head and snap out of my little trance.

    Well, I guess it's time to start begging.

    My first "victim" is a young woman, with a kindly face and strawberry blond hair. Perfect, I think to myself. I approach her slowly, like a lion approaching it's prey, and stop dead in front of her. She can tell. She knows what she has to do. And, surprisingly enough, she does it! Easier than I thought! She hands me a handful of coins and walks off without another glance in my direction. I look down at the coins and count them: £1.20! Blimey!

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    I know, it's a pile o' poo! But yeah...
     
  10. Lol i like the end!!!!blimey!!!! Update
     
  11. Lol. British speak I loooove it Brooke!
     
  12. I like it so far!
     
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  14. @fallen: thats a bit stereotypical seen as im english and dont say Blimey
     
  15. I wasn't talking about that I was talking about "trainers" and "trousers".