Story time.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by PE-TERROR-fyingTurtle, Sep 23, 2013.

  1. What do you think about the magical yellow unicorn who dances on the rainbow with a spoonful of blue cheese dressing? He was a funky little feller, he ended up falling over and landed in a car, dukes of hazard style.


    The end.
     
  2. 
     
  3. You have incredible writing skills?
     
  4. I'm
    Pretty
    Sure
    Mine
    Are
    Better
     
  5. You're
    a
    donkey
    .
    .
    .
    lover
     
  6. You poured your heart into this 
     
  7. So beautiful. Brought a tear to my eye
     
  8. A-thank you, thank you very much.
     
  9. You, sir, are a scholar!
     
  10. One time a car walked up to my cat I ride a that house by white box
     

  11. That's a run on sentence in which you switch tenses. Choose present or past.
     
  12. if you are talking about what I said. It was obviously fiction so it didn't happen happen in the past, present, or future. Even if it was, all of it was past tense. Try again. ^_^