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All I see is darkness. All I hear is darkness. All I feel is darkness. Everyday I'm forced to remember when I was cast into the oblivion of After-Finis. Couldn't I just die already? Death would be a sweet relief from this crude punishment. Unfortunately, I cannot die, for I am immortal. From the corner of the cavern, I tracked the black tangle of limbswith my eyes as it gangled past. "Please!" I beg, "No more! Have I not had enough?" The creature stood behind my bare back, starting the electric whip as my torture began. The hum of blue energy flowing through the tube filled my ears. I remain helpless, my arms fasten to the cave ceiling. Woe is me Is what you shall be, For you scream to the heavens While trapped in hell. Oh dear prisoner, it's time to say farewell. Just as predicted a scream escaped by mouth as the searing whip slashes my back. Was my doing so evil? All I had done was give man fire. Look at what has occurred! No more disease. No absences of light. No more cold, gloomy, nights. Another yell burst from my chest. It was the apex of my "treatment". Meaning that I was almost done for the day. The black beast receded back into the depths of the cavern. Your scars shall heal. Your pain shall fade. Until the next time, When new ones are made. ~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~<>~ I am so upset.
I'm really sorry. I have to admit. This isn't my best work. I tried to do something out of my genre. Honestly I'm more of a romanticBut yeah, it's a super short piece of crap. Please forgive me