 First, Not Last 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by iSassBendAndSnapToBreakNoses, Aug 11, 2013.

  1. THIS is not going on second page NEVER GONNA HAPPEN
     
  2. Not going to second page noway
     
  3. AHHHH ALMOST SECOND PAGE
     
  4. I don't have time to write 
     
  5.  Hello I'm new to Fan Fiction..  Sorta
     
  6. Not going to second page  ever if this goes to second page I'll go crazy?
     
  7. Dunno if I want to finish this story or not 
     
  8. ? WTF I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!
     
  9. You have to finish this story, Shan! Or else...I won't finish Jellybeans and Jelly-knees.
     
  10. SHANA DID YOU THREATEN ME NO NO.  YOU HAVE TO FINISH THAT!!!!!!!
     
  11. Can I just create an ending randomly and that'll be the end? 
     
  12. Then you have to finish this.  Or no finding out what happens to Heather, Ash, and James.
     
  13. As long as the ending makes sense. And it's good. And she ends with Presty. And Oliver gets what's coming to him.
     
  14. Here's the ending: Preston and Oliver finally admit to her that they're cousins and that Oliver paid Preston to hit on her to see if she was loyal or not to Oliver. Oliver finds out she's not because she did fall in love with Preston and Ter does that slow motion running scene where she runs away crying and Preston runs after her. That typical moment happens where he says at first, it was a game, but then I actually did like her back. She cannot decide on who to choose and offers them up a challenge. They each get one date with her and then she'll choose. Oliver takes her to a movie premiere in Hollywood Hills where she meets all his celebrity friends. He takes her to a fancy restaurant and there's a violinist that places "A Thousand Years" for them while Oliver sings. The next day, Preston decides to put on a flannel and a straw hat, and takes Terissa to a farm in the mountains for their date. They herd sheep, milk a cow, collect eggs from chickens, and learn how to make butter. The end the night by going stargazing on top of the mountain, laying on Preston's dad's pick up truck. Terissa sleeps, smiling on who to pick.

    In the end, yes, she does choose Preston and she quotes: "Love is not about taking someone to the fanciest of events and fanciest of restaurants, it's about having fun with that one special person. It doesn't matter how much money someone has, you show off your affection to them in other ways. It doesn't matter how fancy the caviar is, it matters how much you fancy the moment. Your first love, won't always be your last love.

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    I TOTALLY WROTE THAT IN LIKE 15 MINUTES. It's great isn't it? 
     
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  16.  Wait then why was Oliver with another girl in a magazine!!
     
  17. OMG THAT'S SO TWISTY WHY DID YOU NOT WANT TO WRITE THAT THAT'S SUCH A GOOD ENDING AND OMG PRESTYYYY HE'S MINE MINE MINE
     
  18. OH YEAH THAT. His parents set him up with her . Arranged marriage.