Dying Inside

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Michael_the_Dark_Angel, May 15, 2011.

  1. You never tremble at my touch
    Like you used to do.
    You tell me everythings ok,
    But it don't feel the same.

    I want so bad to show you
    Wanna make you see
    That while you may not notice
    My heart is dying inside.

    When I try to share with you
    That somethings missing
    I'm not trying to pick a fight
    Just reaching out because

    I want so bad to show you
    Wanna make you see
    That while you may not notice
    My heart is dying inside.

    I need so much to show you
    Need for you to see
    That someday you will notice
    My hearts stopped dying inside.
     
  2. This is great!
     
  3. Poems...
     
  4. I love it it shows the true pain of love and life A
     
  5. .
    If she doesn't want you...I'll take ya 
     
  6. Glad u like it reeses and thanks adelynn. Unfortunately, it's all too true in the real world.
     
  7. Aw......that's sad....
     
  8. What's truly sad is often the other party realizes they want their mate but arrive at the realization or communicate it way too late.
     
  9. The pain. I can feel it in this poem.
     
  10. Yeah . That's always the worse....
     
  11. I feel the same about now Angel . I love the poem though ~ Archee
     
  12. This is a great poem! You have talent.
     
  13. Thanks guys and really sorry archee. That feeling sucks and I hope things get better for ya soon. Btw, I apologize if this should have been posted in another topic. Still learning the forums. 
     
  14. I love how u feel the love and pain in the poem u can feel the pain in a dying heart threw this poem
     
  15. I love it:) it does show the true pain love holds and it reminds me of an old quote lol I won't post it though...this is your thread:) HAHA keep writing :) ur good