Fan Fiction Reviews!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FallenAngel12321, Aug 25, 2013.

  1. What are those lines for o.o BOBO IS MINE YOU CANNOT HAVE HIM
     
  2. Idk I just wanted it to match up with the screen. And NO HE'S MINE ALL MINEEEEE
     
  3. Just wanted yo say this thread is great :)
     
  4. Thank you Hexin :) and I'm waiting…
     
  5. Just don't let this die like my FFN :(
     
  6. I won't hopefully
     
  7. 

    I sit in my bush, waiting for the long overdue update. Time passes slowly, more slowly than I could ever have imagined before. Each second drags by, making my task simply unbearable. But all I can do is wait.

    My anticipation evaporated, along with my excitement. It just couldn't last. The age old words echo in my head;

    "I swear I'll review tomorrow!"

    Tis a painful thing, this waiting.

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    Review that while you're waiting on the update 
     
  8. My review:

    Who sits in a bush? 0.o Shrubs are the way to go.
     
  9. A bush is a type of shrubbery 
     
  10. Not if you call them… bushes. -shudders in disgust- They're shrubs. That's the only way they can be awesome.
     
  11. Well damn I screwed up that bb code.
     
  12. But it's just a name! D:
     
  13. IT'S SO MUCH MORE THAN THAT
     
  14. *dies from lack of update* damn you everyone for not being accidentally killed by me before my death
     
  15. GIVE US THE BLOODY UPDATE!
     
  16. I'm… waiting… D: soon, my children, soon…
     
  17. Let's start a riot! *throws a teddy bear* Mew :3