Prologue: Kneeling, breathing deeply trying to regain my strength. I look around and see the blood shed on my hand and watching people during around me all fighting for one cause. Don't know why we all fight, but if we all desire the same goals in life, it's better to do it with someone. I grab my blade and get up an started to charge again. I can't anymore blood be shed as long as I'm still breathing. I can not lose! Chapter 1: the beginning It was normal morning, mother was out working on the farm, father was always in his shop making tools and weapons for the towns folk. Me, the names Alfonso but everyone calls me Al. My older sister is call rose, she dreams of becoming captain of the Guards and becoming the strongest. My dream in life was to actually have a dream, I never really had a goal in life other then to help others when they needed it like chores or doing small favors. I don't do it for the money, I do it cause I actually enjoy helping others when they need it. Makes me feel wanted. Every morning my sister goes out and trains. I could say she is an expert at swordsmanship. Sometimes I tag along and train but I only don't so I have some fighting skill if I ever need it in the future. Our village is a small little one, we live outside of our kingdom up in the north since we try and stay away from the other kingdoms down in the south. They are driven by greed and power an always starting up trouble with us but we maintain a solid defense to keep them out. I was out gathering some supplies that my mother sent me for. All seemed fine till I herd some screaming off in the distance. I turned and I noticed a fire has broken out on a house. But what made it strange was I swear I could see a man standing in the middle of the flames.
Not bad. Some spelling/grammar mistakes, though, and your title isn't capitalized which really kills my soul. Yes. My soul.
Chapter 2: a change of fate I kept on staring at the man in the midst of the flame. Eventually he turned to me. I felt frozen, couldn't move or budge. The man smiled and chuckled. He charged at me yelling and stabbing his arm through my chest. I blacked out and knew I had died. It was all dark but it felt like I was dreaming. Is this what the after life is? Did I truly die? Just then I herd a voice. Normally I would kill a human like you but I need a human with a good heart to help me complete a goal. Care to listen? I said yes weakly and saw a reflection of my self. Then my reflection grew horns and fangs and started to speak. I am one of the dark lords followers. I am sent to wipe out the human race and let the demons have the land for there own, but I don't desire that. I want the land to be equal among the both of the race. So I've done something that shouldn't been done. I merged our heart and soul together. Why? Cause when these two objects work together, a new strength is unlocked. I'll help save your race if you help be take down the dark lord. Deal? I didn't know what to say. But I answered, am I dead? No, I just mentally knocked you out. Right now it looked like you passed out on the floor in the real world. But there's something I should mention. Since our heart and soul are one, you can use my strength but your appearance will change. I know this is a huge favor to ask but please, I need a humans help. I thought for a second. If I help him, I'll stop the blood shed with this new found power and protect the ones I care. But my appearance will change? What does he mean by it will change? Well I have no other option. I'll help. Really? Thank you I'm glad I got to meet you. My name is grim. Now I think it's time you woke up now didn't we? I started to wake up but I realized I was under a pile of chard wood and hot coals. I jumped out coughing and catching my breath. I looked around and saw my village. Covered in smokes and flames. Did I do this? What happen? mom! Dad! Sister! No! It can't be happening! What the hell happen!!!!
Remember to use quotation marks when someone is speaking. For example: "I like cookies," she said. Or She said, "I like cookies."
Sport. I apologies. Like I said before English isn't my first language so my writing skills is very poor