a sneak peek of my new fanfic

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Rainbow_Angel (01), Aug 27, 2013.

  1. As Laila walked down the halls of her school she felt somthing touch her. Somthing like a ghostly hand, But she turns to see no one there. "Huh?" She said to herself "no one was there." But she just shrugged and walked on...


    End of preview :3
     
    #1 *Rainbow_Angel (01), Aug 27, 2013
  2. :3 You switched tenses, misspelled 'something', and that comma should be a period.
     
    #2 FallenAngel12321, Aug 27, 2013
  3. Usually a sneak peak is a snippet from the rising action or other exciting aspect of the story... This was kind of just... Eh.
     
    #3 ThatManWes, Aug 27, 2013
  4. *peek  had to.
     
    #4 FallenAngel12321, Aug 27, 2013
  5. Crappy sneak peek.
     
    #5 N00BxD, Aug 28, 2013
  6. Eh....
     
    #6 RosyBlue, Aug 28, 2013
  7. Yes, I made a spelling error. I'm tired, got dumped, stressed about work, and I probably have gotten two hours of sleep. Thank you for your kindness. -.-
     
    #7 ThatManWes, Aug 28, 2013
  8. You're welcome. :D btw you should update parasite when you're feeling better.
     
    #8 FallenAngel12321, Aug 28, 2013
  9. It's never going to get updated. -.-
     
    #9 ThatManWes, Aug 28, 2013
  10. I meant the second one. And if you say that one's not gonna get updated I'll hurt you.
     
    #10 FallenAngel12321, Aug 28, 2013
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