Awake: An Angel's Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Eledrania, Aug 24, 2013.

  1. ELE! This is cool, can I be a part of it too?
     
  2. I feel so special being mentioned once in the story haha xD jk i love your story either way
     
  3. Sorry XD it's hard fitting everyone in, but I'm trying. I don't want to put too many people xD
     
  4. I be the killer I happy
     
  5. Yay I'm in the story!:) thank youu 
     
  6. Sorry you lot >.< I've had writers block. But I think I may have slept it off yayyyy!!!
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    After sitting at the lunch table for about 10 minutes, with no sign of Cody, Ele saw him peek his head out of the bathroom.
    "Eledrania..." Daniel's mind popped into hers,"This boy knows who you are... Don't let him endanger your assignment." She rolled her eyes and thought back at him,"You got it Danny Boy, I'll talk to him." Danny let out an exaggerated mind-sigh,"Please, be careful."
    Ele rolled her eyes again, then gestured at Cody to come over.
    Cody jumped a bit, and shakily made his way over,"H-hey.... El- I mean Emma..." Ele facepalmed,"Cody... Follow me, please."
    She got up and walked towards a janitors closet,"In there, quick, so no one sees." Cody shook violently,"What are we doing?"
    Ele simply stated,"Talking."

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    Jooks POV
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    He was extremely alert, He was quiet, yes. Weak. Oh Hell no.
    Chas was like his little sister, he stayed with her at all times. And when the four juiced up looking boys walked up to her. He was ready for whatever happened.
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    Chas's POV
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    "Okay so one time. I got lost in the woods. And like. My uncle, he's a cop, had to like, come and get me from where I popped out, like, 2 miles away!" She was babbling to a very uninterested Nails.
    As soon as she was about to start talking again, four large boys walked up to her,
    "Well hey there pretty girl!" The smallest one said. "The name is Justin, this is Scott, Marcos, and Vin."
    "Hi! I'm Chas! I'm from jasper! It's a pleasure to meet you! This is jooks! He's like my older brother! And I'm sure you know nails... Emma was here a second ago...." She looked around,"Well... I wonder where she went..."
    The boys all exchanged nervous glances," Eh... Hi... Chas..."
     
  7. Sorry for how long it took ^^ I've been having trouble finding ideas.
     
  8. Why am I just in your mind? o-o I wanna be on earth too (/-.-)/ please?
     
  9. Danny just wait \(-.-\) Kukamunga I'll get to it.
     
  10. Lets see was happening with Cody and Ele!
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    As soon as the got in the closet, Ele simply stated,"Cody... I know you can see me."
    Cody blubbered for a second,"ELE! Your supposed to be dead! You were killed. And. And.. And... Why are you here?"
    Ele could not handle him blubbering,
    "Cody, if you don't calm down I'll have to slap you."
    He immediately stopped, looking at her questioningly," Why are you here?"
    She sighed loudly,"I have to find my murderers...." Cody stared in disbelief... "They make you do that?"
    "Yup." She wasn't going to tell him much more. Until he piped up,"So what are you? A ghost or something???"
    Frowning,"Well...." She tried to think of a way to put it,"Im... An angel..."
    The next thing she knew, Cody was on the ground, dying in laughter,"YOU?! AN ANGEL? BAHAAHA! yea right, what a joke!" He was laughing so hard he was crying.
    Ele just stare at him, arms crossed,"Im not kidding Cody..." He just kept laughing, so ele... Not enjoying being laughed at walked in front of the janitors mirror in the closet. Her wings revealed, Cody stopped laughing,
    "Woah.... That's bizarre..." His eyes wide, Ele barely had time to snap her wings shut and move away from the mirror, before the door swung open.
    "Oh... Sorry... Didn't know there was anyone in here...." Josh stood there, eyes puffy. Ele stared in disbelief. Josh. Her old Boyfriend.
    She had only seen him once, but was too focused on everything else to realize how hard he was taking this.
    She stuttered,"H-Hi, I'm Emma.... We were just talking about something..." Cody nodded, watching quietly.
    Josh just nodded, quietly replying," okay... I'll just go to the bathroom.." He moped towards the men's room.
    Ele watched as he walked away, close to tears. "Oh... Why did life have to end so soon for me?"
    "Because that's what was meant to happen." Danny's voice was heard, but this time. Not in my head.
    No. Danny was here, he was wearing normal clothes. "Danny! Why are you here?"
    He stared at her, looking a bit angry,
    "About your little revelation to you friend there." He pointed at Cody.
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    Oh noooze  Danny is Mad!!!! And Who is josh? I know but I bet a bunch of you don't!
    Love,
    Ele
     
  11. Why am I angry?? 
     
  12. Oh no 
     
  13. Because ele dun goofed ._. She dun goofed.
     
  14. Ele dun messed up bad
     
  15. U said a bit angry so u could make him smirk
     
  16. \(-.-)z this be the best story ever!!
     
  17. Yes it is the best story ever cuz I'm a boss Jk cuz ele a boss
     
  18. Why shank you all ^^