The reason we wanted Kati gone was because she's been trying to steal my life. Turns out she's the girl Archi cheated on me with. She is also the one who Matt had an affair with. Not to mention the one who stole my tooth brush. I mean I get it I'm noticed and cared for, but stealing my lofe wont make people like you. I begin blinking hearing a snapping sound. "Whoa.. what I miss?" Jook looks at me. "K..ati.. she's.. on the move." I giggle soft and fly into the tree as a bat. Looking down I can see then combing through the tall grass. "And you're possitive you left it out here?" Kati asks in disbelief. "I'm sure of it I think I dropped it in the hole by the tree, and you're the only one who can get it." Kati begins looking by the hole looking for Storms necklace. Storm wraps in her hand and make a bird call. I flip out of the tree and kicks her head in the hole. "Look what we've got here." Kati looks around and says "Yumi help she just attacked me out of nowhere I I don't know what to do." I laugh grabbing her by her hair and tosses her into a tree. "Yumi what are you doing?" She says after dislocating her shoulder. "Playing a little game." I reply with an insane look in my eyes. I teleport to her and chokes her slamming her into the tree. "Yumi, come on I'm your best friend." I snap her neck and cring at the thought. With a hint of betrayal I reply, "We were NEVER... friends." I walk off into the distance with Jook and Storm beside me leaving her body. Scott flies down beside her and checks his list. "Not one of mine." He then looks over seeing a portal appear. Out walks Hades ruler of the underworld. "I've been waiting a long time for this one." Scott laughs as Hades rips out her soul sending it into the portal. He then ingites a fire watching as her body turns to ash.following that Scott flaps his wings and the ash is brushed away in a gust of wind. Back at my house filing my nails the door swings open. "Doesn't anyone know how to knock?" Matt walks over flipping a table. "You killed her?" He says in rage. "I was doing everyone a favor." He grips my up as ge growls."Go ahead.. I dare you.!" Just as he goes to bite me which could make me age until I'm dust, Scott tackles him into a wall. "Excuse me sir.. I just cleaned can this be taken outside?" I say to lighten the mood. Taking it seriously Scott throws him through the wall and step out the hole. I look at the hole and face palms walking to my bedroom. Matt bites into Scott tearing a wing off. Scott then creates a dark orb the size of my house that blast Matt through the trees. Matt slowly gets up and walks with a limp to the wolf mansion. "There goes another relationship." Scott appears in my room "You don't need that.. yoi deserve better." Laughing at the thought I push him out my window and watches him teleport away before hitting the ground. After many failed atempts at a relationship Scott calls me. "Hey how've you been?" He says sadly. "Not so good, are you okay?" I reply. He sighs "Teddy broke up with me." I look at the phone confused. "Teddy.. what happened to Casey?" He ignores then says , "You remember back when I first got here?" Looking around baffled I reply, "Yeah I was with Archi." He relpies with "Yea you was shoved pretty far up his butt to realise how wrong he treated you." I agree and he says " I had a huge crush on you... Kinda still do.." I blush and smile to myself unable to speak. He hangs up and appears at my bedside. "Be mine? I decline since he's dated Casey and after a week I ask him out seeing as though she is with someone else anyways and I deserve happiness too. He accepts and we fall in love. The next day we read and article in the creatures paper that read on the headlines LOCAL ELF DIED FROM CHOKING ON A M&M." I laughs slightly then leaves a note saying "I'll be back later going to be foresaken." Running I go to Vin. "Are you sure?" He ask knowing he doesn't want to lose the best queen he's had. I nod and he begins on my being foresaken and the transformation is complete. I then leave and Mulan hands me a potion. I drink it and turn into a cat then shift leaving my tail and ears out. I hug Mulan and she rolls her eyes. Soon after I decide to look for my parents. With my new hightened senses I sniff my dads jacket and flies towards the scent landing in the mountain region. I walk into a cave and sees there body frozen in a block of ice. I slowly back up with tears falling I run out of the cave and scream as loud as I can. Without realizing a massive avalanch form and wisk my away falling into a trench and I'm left buried under snow. Scott begins worrying since I haven't been home to make dinner for out children Kennie the eldest she is a young witch with potential, and King at age 4 adopted from a wolf family. He tells Kennie she is in charge and begins his search to find their mother. To be continued...
If it's only for your club members then why post it on FF? I'm just wondering, because the forum is public to everyone in this game. And thanks for clarification on my confusion. I apologize for interrupting your story.
I'm not saying you cannot read I'm just saying I made it for their amusement and its here because its clearly roomie enough for them. :-B off to put my son to bed now toodloo forums
I have a question. Are you a true writer? Because true writers strive to get better. No one's writing is perfect, and good authors will cherish criticism so they can improve. Advice. Is. Not. Hate. Also, like what poppet said, this is public. If you only wanted your club members to read this you shouldn't have posted it here. In ff we give every new story feedback. If you didn't want that you can't yell at us for doing something we would do to every story. I think you should have written something about this only being intended for your club members in the beginning. You could have saved us a lot of time, effort, and hardship. But as it is now, you have no right to bitch at us. I'll get off now. Kthxbai~
Look hun don't get me started if I was bitching you'd know. How about you mind you own and get a life all you do Is jump on peoples forums no I'm not a writer Iillistrate so please take your honey boo boo lookin' self somewhere else ain't nobody got time to argue. I was having a friendly chat and then you come in talking bullshit. Can you just go before i have a bitch fit -.-
Do you wanna know something? I already have a life. This is my life. Writing is my life. And I don't 'jump on people's forums', because 1.) they're called threads and 2.) threads are made so people will read them and comment. I was doing what was expected and most usually wanted. You can't tell people to mind their own business if they comment on something made to be commented on. I have never watched a Honey Boo Boo episode in my life. I'm proud of that fact, and even though it's irrelevant, you brought it up first so I'm just replying. Finally, if you don't want to argue don't argue. In my opinion you're being completely irrational. But just don't reply to this and I'll know you're done fighting.
I said you look like her. Never said you watched her and thread forum idc honestly. honetly im not arguing. Im not even mad you're just annoying. Writing can be your life like art is mine.. goodbye sugamama
Yumi, I'm afraid that Angel has a point. I have been writing here on FF for over a year now, and it is meant for stories. This is a story, so it does belong here. However, Angel and Mirai have been here just as long as I have, maybe even longer. All they want to do is help people improve. You know I would never hate on your story, and they wouldn't either. All they want to do is help. It is fine if you don't want to accept their advice, but it's a little harsh to be mean to them. I think your story is great, but because I need glasses I can't read it. There are no gaps in the text, so I can't read more than the first few sentences before everything jumbles up Please, just accept their advice and move on. If you don't want to use it, that's fine. Just remember that all they want to do is help you become a better writer so more people will read and enjoy every word that you write.