It's February 15th, 2013. Riding in our snowy while taurus, I sit beside my mother smiling "I can't wait to see our new home." I say excitedly. My mother nods, she doesn't talk much.. In fact I haven't heard a peep from her since my brother died. I look at her dark brown hair and her hazel eyes and sigh. "Mom? When we get there can I take a look around town. I promise I won't be out too long." She smile and mouths the word yes. At times like this I miss her voice, it almost sounded like an angel. Well of course that is if I knew what one sounded like. We finally arrive at out new home. The house isn't much of a looker. There is leaves all through the yard and it looks a bit old. She then parks and I step out. I turn and smile as my father pulls up in the U-haul. He has hair as dark as dark as the crows watching from the trees, and you will never catch him out of uniform. He's been a police officer for 15 years. But he couldn't take living in that town once he caught the man whom had killed my brother. You see my brother was always sneaky. He pulled a fast one on my dad and started working for the biggest mob boss in town. He then stole money from him and he shot him dead, without even thinking about it. I guess that's why he is so protective over me. I grab my bag and shut the car door and start making my way out of the yard as I hear "And where do you think you're going?" I turn and look up seeing my father with his arms folded and a look in his eyes that say "You know I don't want you getting hurt." I raise my brow and sighs then says softly "I'm going to take a look around town."He the motion for me to go and I smile bright. I run down the road walking past the strangest man. He has long dark hair clear down his back and eyes that I've never seen before. They was as red as a fire truck. He stops and turns to me and says with a chizzled voice "You're new here aren't you?" I stop in my tracks and faces him. "Is it that obvious?" I say to him hugging myself. He chuckles and then says "I've been here a while, nothing gets past me.!" I then smile and reach out my hand "The names Yumi." Before taking my hand he looks me up and down, almost as if he already knew. He then takes it and grins, thens shakes it. "I'm Vin, you're moving up in the Webters place right?" he replied in a questionable tone. "Yeah.. how'd you know?" I ask as I tilt my head. He smiles "Small town, and I know all." I look at him with a worry in my eyes and slowly back up. "Well I should be going."He nods and I turn and begin walking. Once again stopping in my tracks I turn and look back but he's gone within an instant. Looking down shaking my head I tell myself it's nothing. Soon after it grows dark and I start walking home. I hear howls in the distance and start running. I look back to make sure I'm not followed and runs into the arms of Vin. His eyes glowing in the night he smiles wide as his fangs show. I look at him in fear "This can't be happening, this isn't real." I whisper to myself. He then bite into my neck, and I black out as his fangs break my soft skin and pierce my body. All I feel is the venom course through my veins. Waking up in my bed the next morning I look around holding my head. I walk into my room then walks into the bathroom feeling my neck as I look expecting to see the marks but nothing. I splash water on my face and look up seeing my eyes glow red and I fall screaming. "What the... No!" I then say to myself as I slowly stand to look into the mirror. Rubbing my eyes I then decide to look again and they are back to a light brown. I walk downstairs realising I'm the only one home I head a knock on the door. I hesitate to open it and looks down. "It's all in your head." I slowly open the door and Vin is standing there holding suitcases. "What are you doing here, what did you do to me, and why do you have those?" I point at the black leathered suitcases. He chuckles "I didn't do anything you didn't want me to, now will you let me in?" He says amused. I let him in, so I can get the answers I deserve. Although the whole time he's packing my clothes and ignoring every word I say. He then grabs me and walks outside tossing me into his old gothic car. "What are you going to tell my parents did you think of that?" Again he chuckles "They are already taken care of." I look at him in confusion as his driver takes off down the drive way. A few hours go by and we arrive at a mansion. He lays down the rule as we walk inside. Seeing as though I'm seventeen years old and do as I please I ignored him. I walk up to my new room and begin painting the walls as I meet a boy around my age. We hit it off nicely and begin dating. But as time went on we grew apart. I started falling for this guy who popped in every once in a while. He was quite the charmer. His name is Archi, he is about 6'1and a face that looked like it was carved by angels. Walking outside to go meet Archi, Vin teleports beside me. "You aren't hanging out with the wolf king again are you?" I fold my arms and look away "And if I am?" I reply in a harsh tone. He hiss and slams the door shut. "I won't allow it, he's not a good guy." I look at him with fear in my eyes then pulls the door open and runs out. He shakes his head at the idea that he could keep me away from Archi. I walk through the forest and smiles as I see Archi shifting to a human leaning against a tree. "Sneaking away again?" he laughs. "Yeah, you know Vin always looking out for me." I reply sadly. He lefts my chin up and kisses me softly then takes my hand and walks me to his mansion. I sit on his couch indian style as he wraps his arm around me. Things begin taking off and years pass. The spark in our relationship goes out and we begin fighting. He would then leave me with his children Richard and Kitty for months at a time. Richard felt like he had no father figure and Kitty was too young to understand. Vin couldn't even look at me seeing as though he couldn't even find it in himself to say I told you so. I hug myself seeing as though I'm pregnant again. He comes home from another late night. "Where have you been, you can't keep doing this to our family?" He grabs me and looks me in the eyes. "There's someone else." He ssys to me in a stern voice the breaks between word. I begin crying and screaming for him to get out. Time passes and I kept letting him back in as I fall into the arms of someone else. "I cheated on you?" I say to his with my eyes stiched shut. He punch the wall behind me and growl in fury. He sifts to a wolf and runs out without even a goodbye and I slowly take off my ring. Tears fall as it drops to the ground and the sound echos through my head.. That's all for now I can continue if you like it. The story has a lot more to it.
A few weeks have passed and I lay awake eating cookie dough ice cream and a bag of BBQ Lays chips. I hear a knock at the door but ingore it. Soon Scott appears in front of me. "Not answering doors huh?" I nod in agreement and throws the covers over my head. "You can't live like this forever you know that right?" I shake my head and he pulls the blankets off of me. We tug on the blankets back and forth. He then lets go sending me flying off the bed and laughs. "That's not funny you butthead." He laughs and helps me up. "Still dealing with that jerk after all he put you through?" I look away "You don't understand." He looks at me in disappointment. "Well I'm kind of still upset about the Matt and Casey thing." He sighs and looks down. I hug him tight and he smiles down at me. He kisses my forehead and we appear down by the lake. That was the one place we could escape to and just hang out. We'd sit on a rock and talk for hours. Scott looks at me and takes my hamd wrapping my arms behind his neck and his angel wings extended. I smiled at him as he wrapped his arms around my waist and flew into the sky. Then he later flew over to the beach so we could meet up with the rest of the creatures. There I seen Vin the Lord of Darkness. Also know as Vampire king. Matt the new Wolf king being silly as always. Mulan the demon queen and guardian of us all. Lastly Ems and Tigress. Ems the wolf Princess don't let her blonde hair fool you she has a country attitude and a deep past. Tigress the shifter princess laid with her tiger tail and tiger ears by the fire. Feeling a gust of wind coming over head I look up and see Raku. He is a great and powerful elder dragon. He landed in the water and shifts into a human. "Oops, kind of messed up on the landing." He says scratching his head as we laugh. Scott goes over to Casey trying to get her back and Matt and I walk down the beach. I look back giving Scott a thumbs up and he smiles. Halfway down the beach we stop near a cave and begin talking about our past. To be continued.
Matt then decides he wants to be with me and pulls me closed. I smiles and agree to be his but I didn't know what secrets that he held. We then got back to the bonfire and sat with everyone as the sun began to set and Vin was already intoxicated. He danced around the fire in a hula skirt singing as people laughed and recorded the whole thing. Scott and Casey decided to try it out one last time. The days turned into months, and the months into years. I started thinking about what brought me here. Was this my destiny..? Was I born to rule over the vampire species.? The set in and I was at the campsite with Matt and he starts fiddling with his pocket. "Are you okay?" I than ask him feeling foolish. It could be just my imagination. He smile and nods then pulls me to the center. I look as everyone gathers around. He gets down on one knee and pulls out a ring. He then says, "Yumi will you do me the honor of making me the happiest man in the world?" I being crying and smiles wider than ever. I say yes as he slide the ring on my finger. Feeling upset that Kitty and Richard couldn't share this moment with me as they tour the world, walks and sit cuddled next to the fire. In the morning I wake up in the tent with shaving cream across my face and screams running outside. Matt stands in the lake in his sleeping back. "It could be worse." He says retorically.I laugh holding my ribs and falls to the ground. Then everyone else awakens from my laughter and sees we've been pranked. Ems looks around and punches a tree as birds fly out of it. Tyler the elf king runs out with his blonde hair and blur eyes and hugs the tree. "Trees have feelings too!" He shouts at the top of his lungs. Ems rolls her eyes "Do you think I care about yer darn tree." Tyler stands up straight holding his magic flute. "You should." He says threateningly. cont.
She then shifts into a wolf and smacks him into a tree with her tail. "Just stay out of my way or yer dead." He plays his magical flute and the tree grabs her locking her in it's clutches and a new girl arrives. "Hi I'm looking for Tyler." She says in a sweet voice. Instantly I didn't like her, there was just something I couldn't quite put my finger on. But I knew she was trouble and I didn't like it. Her name was Kati, she was a short stubby elf who would do anything to get what she wants. She glared at me and looked back at Tyler. "Heard you're looking for a queen?" He nod and releasing Ems forgetting that they were in the middle of a fued. She runs and tackles him and Kati gasp, followed by a giggle. Romeo, Archi and my child comes running out of the forest with a spray can in his mouth. Still soaked from being in the lake Matt runs over. "I think we found out who did this to us." He says in a punishing tone as Noa his girlfriend pokes her head out from behind a tree. She waves smiling coutiously and her dad Spin the powerful wizard king whom lives alone in a tower taps his foot. She sighs putting her head down and he takes her to their tower. He places her in a room with a apple. Cont.
She then reaches for the apple and out of surprise it changes into a bat and flies around the roon in horror. I walk to go see Spin to make sure he isn't being to hard on her. Shocked to see his way of punishment he looks at me and grins."What are you doing to her." I say in confusion. He looks at me and smirks. "Noa loves apples but is afraid of bats." He said as he makes a stance that says I'm a genius. "She's your daughter not a lab rat." He scoffs and replies, "That's precisely what she is... I adopted her and saved her." "Wha.. what do you mean." Talking in a low voice. "You see she was sick and was going to die so I brought her here and tested on her, she was first turned into a zombie then I turned her into a human taking away her desease
She then reaches for the apple and out of surprise it changes into a bat and flies around the roon in horror. I walk to go see Spin to make sure he isn't being to hard on her. Shocked to see his way of punishment he looks at me and grins."What are you doing to her." I say in confusion. He looks at me and smirks. "Noa loves apples but is afraid of bats." He said as he makes a stance that says I'm a genius. "She's your daughter not a lab rat." He scoffs and replies, "That's precisely what she is... I adopted her and saved her." "Wha.. what do you mean." Talking in a low voice. "You see she was sick and was going to die so I brought her here and tested on her, she was first turned into a zombie then I turned her into a human taking away her infectious disease, and after gave her super human powers." I look at him then back at her worrily. After a few minutes I couldn't bare to watch it anymore.I walk back outside noticing someone watching me in a bush. I then levitate her out of the bush and she kicks her feet."It's not wise to sneak up on the vampire queen you know?" I say in a fearful voice. She sqeals, "Put me down I say.. feel the wrath of Storm the mighty Queen of Shifters.. You'll be sorry." She says in the tiniest voice as I lower her to the ground. "I've been watching you." She says as I fold my arms. "You have? I hadn't noticed." I say sarcastically. She then says, "We could be partners y'know." I laugh at the thought and roll my eyes hearing a faint voice behind me. "She's right.. the three of us could.. I mean.. if you want?" I turn and scream "How long have you been there?"He look up and rubs his left arm shyly looking down. "I.. my name is Jook.. I watch with her... We are.. a team." She nods and I shake my head walking away. "We can help you get rid of Kati." She says with a sneaky voice. I look back and smile. "Now you're speaking my language!" I said in amazement. Then she tells me her plan and we begin putting it into action. Cont.
I agree with, Angel. Paragraphs please. And I'm like totally confused. The first update was good and the second update jumps ahead to the future? I'm totally confused. You need to clarify events happening.
We're not hating. We're trying to help improve her writing . Please do not think of it as anything else other than tips for her.
Sorry my story is staying as is. My android is acting stupid as well as this keyboard this was't made for either of you. It was made for my club members. Sorry but if you don't like it. Don't read it. It jumps through time because this started months ago and these are events that happened in my club amd some I imagined thanks for your tips but I like it my way.