{Flashback} "Hey Kat you want a ride ? I hate to see you walking in the snow " said Andrew I agreed and got into his truck. *the ride was filled with silence* Once we got there he dropped me off but before he did he asked me if I could go with him to the coffee place on Main St . Of course I said yes he has been my friend since 1st grd Pls post comments and tell me how to make it better this is my first story
Please don't use asterisks.? Any actions can be described with words. Also, add punctuation and description. I can't see where this is going yet, but I'll be reading.