FAN FICTIONPimD Love Story Abour Bro And Cheerlead

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mr_HardCore_Lover07, Aug 13, 2013.

  1. Hi Guys Its Me Mr_Hardcore_Lover07 Im Proudly Present My Fan Fiction To You And Someone Special In My Life Who Can Make Me Happy
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    When Bro First Arrive In Movement University He Is handsome
     
    #1 Mr_HardCore_Lover07, Aug 13, 2013
  2. This good
     
    #2 *Enigmaa (01), Aug 13, 2013
  3. What... the...
     
    #3 iSassBendAndSnapToBreakNoses, Aug 13, 2013
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    #4 iDontLikePeople2, Aug 13, 2013
  5. …oh dear gawd… my eyes… /).(\

    Please don't capitalize the first letter of every word. It kills my eyes.

    Also, is that supposed to be a story? With an exposition and resolution and climax and rising and falling action? Because you don't even have punctuation.
     
    #5 FallenAngel12321, Aug 13, 2013
  6. Fuq goddamn iPad
     
    #6 Mr_HardCore_Lover07, Aug 14, 2013
  7. Don't bypass. It will get your thread locked.
     
    #7 FallenAngel12321, Aug 14, 2013
  8. Wow
     
    #8 RosyBlue, Aug 21, 2013
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