I Personal Love Fantasy Stories. So Im Gonna Go Ahead And Make One! . Enjoy! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lays in a soft, damp patch of moss and leaves on the forest floor. Hearing the birds chirp away, as if they were talking. The rustling of leaves in the high tree tops. Creatures lurking among the shadows of the mysterious forest. A light mist floated through the air. The sun makes it's way to the forest floor. I slowly awaken taking in the smell of nature and flowers. A wonderful mixture in scent. My hair running down my back. Long white hair collecting in the moss. My hair was long, very long. I have never cut it. I blink a few times looking around. Then slowly gets up. Tucking my hair behind my long pointed ear. Yes, I am a wood Elf. I stand up. Bending down to pick up my dagger and Bow and arrow. Gracefully runs through the forest, until I come upon the crystal clear pond. I set my bow and arrow down against a rock. And then my dagger. I cup my hands together. And dips them in the water. Getting a hand full of water. And drinks the cleansing water. I start to take off my clothing. Setting them down by my weapons. And climbs into the cool water. Washing all the dirt, moss, and leaves off of me. Picks through my hair. Taking all the twigs out. And dips my head under. Washing my hair out. When I come back up. I turn towards my clothes, and sees a man standing there watching me. He kneeled down. Coming closer to me. "Hello, You are one beautiful Elf." He reaches towards her. Tucking a strayed of hair behind her ear. Then he reaches through the water and takes her hand. "Come..." He holds a cotton softly towel for her. She doesn't say anything. Once he gets her out of the water. He wrapped to towel around her naked body. She looks over his shoulder and sees a white horse. The rare enchanted white horse. The man then picked her up and carries her to the horse. The man then said. " Im Name is Erik. What might your name be my lady?" A light switch turned on in her head. He must be Prince Erik! Her cheeks start to heat up. " My name is Alessandra." He didn't say anything just smiled at her. The The horse trolled beside him. "Where are we going?" She asked after a while of walking. Erik looked at me. "To my kingdom." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you had fun reading this!! Please leave comments.
Chapter Two ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The prince carries her back to the castle on foot. She slowly starts to fall asleep in his arms. Erik hums quietly to himself as he walks. Slowly caressing her cheek. He reaches the castle and walks through the town hold her. The town's people saw him and bowed respectfully. At the castle doors both guards bow. Then they open the door for them. " Prince Erik! Your back! Your father would like to see you right away!" A servant said ad she bows. "Very well. Finn!" He calls out. A muscular man came walking over. He was a elf as well as everyone else. " please bring her up to my chambers. And if she awakens get her anything she needs or wants." The guard nodded. " Sir." He answers as he takes Alessandra from his arms. The guard walks up the many stairs leading to the prince's chambers. The walls were a blueish white colors. There was a huge white bed in the middle of the room. And a whole wall of books. The guard lays Alessandra on the bed. Watches her for a bit. Admiring her. Then turns and leaves. After 30 minutes or so she started to wake up. She sat up, only to see the prince- Erik- Watching her sleep from a chair in the corner of the room. "Your up." He stands up making his way over to her. She nods slowly. Watching him. He sits next to her on the bed. " I would like you to stay.." He said calmly. Just then there was a gentle knock on the door. "Calm in please." Erik said as he glances at the door. The door slowly opened and a tiny older looking woman walked in. "For her.." She set a few outfits down on the table. The turned and left. Erik got up and walked over to the table and looked at all the outfits. Then picks up gown. It was pale blue with crystals running across the hip. Stitched pattern around the v cut neck line. He walks over to her and laid it on the bed. " I shall leave for you to get changed." And without another word. She swiftly walked out the door. Shutting it behind him. Alessandra got changed. And then looks on the table and found white flats. She slowly slips them on. Then opens the door. Taking a step out and sees the prince's back turned away from him as he talks to someone. Erik turns and glances over his shoulder at her. Then meets her teal eyes. He stopped talking. And walked over to her. "You look even more beautiful." He takes her hand. And walks down the stairs with her. "Where are we going?" He chuckles a bit. "You are one curious person Alessandra. We are going to meet the King and Queen." Alessandra eyes widen. All Alessandra could think about was. What if I'm not worthy enough to be presented to the King and Queen. I Have No Royal blood. I Am Not Important ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Comment and enjoy!!
I actually read it... but sometimes I like to stay silent ?. Bump though! People need to read this
He Kidnaped her........... He watched her sleep........... He watched her bathe....... He is a biiiitttt of a stalker........ AND SHE IS ONLY WORRIED ABOUT MEETING HIS PARENTS?????????????????????????????????????? This Elf got things to work out haha Buuutt Great writing and description and all that lol
Yup! Elfs are Confident WTH their bodies. And I would be scared if it was a King and Queen!! Hello they can banish you from the land. Lmao!
Chapter Three.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Alessandra followed closely behind Erik. He held her hand tight was they walked to the throne room. Alessandra didn't realize it but she been holding her breathe the whole time. She let out a small sigh before entering the throne room. Alessandra and Erik walked slowly down the aisle and both bowed their heads as they approach the King and Queen. Erik let go of Alessandra hand after giving it a little squeeze and then walked up to the throne and took a seat next to his father-the king- Alessandra stood there in front of them King stood up. His face was wrinkling with age. His hair turning gray. And he growing a beard. Even though elf love longer then Humans. They do die at one point in time. And I can tell that this man- the king of Elfs- his time is nearly done. "What is Thus name?" He said in a deep stern voice. That echoed through the whole Throne room. " Alessandra... Your Highness." She bowed again. She just stood there. It's not everything day that someone-a commoner- Such as Alessandra is even welcomed into the castle. "Alessandra, What a lovely name." The Queen nodded approvingly. "Thank you. Your highness." She looks down. Not knowing if she shod make eye contact or is that considered rude to them. "Dear, Look up please. I would love to see your face." Alessandra slowly lifts her head up. Looking at the Queen. "What beautiful eyes you have." She stares into Alessandra's eyes. A bright teal color. With a twinkle to it. Erik glances over at his mother. Then at his father. All three of them exchanges looks. Alessandra could only watch them. And think. This is a bad idea.. I shouldn't have come with him. He's a prince I'm just a commoner. Not even.. The double doors to the throne room bursts open. "Mother! Father!" An extremely handsome man walked into the throne room. He actually looks like Erik. Alessandra examined his face. Wait he looks exactly like Erik. "Oh dear! You've returned safely!" The mother cried tears of happiness. The man stopped right behind Alessandra. She turns a bit looking at him. " oh my lady.." He takes Alessandra hand as bows and kisses her knuckles. Alessandra couldn't help but blush. Her cheeks turning a rosy red color. The king clapped his hands. The man stood back up. And took his seat next to Erik. Erik's eyes were burning with rage. The Queen stood up next to the King. "Alessandra, meet my wonderful family. My Husband King Aron, Myself Queen Zalda, And my twin sons Prince Erik and Prince Landon. Twins?!?? Alessandra brain try to process everything they had just said. Landon smiles at her. "Welcome." He smiled at her. Alessandra smiled back. "Thank you." The Queen walked down to join Alessandra. "Lets go see what's for dinner." She and Alessandra had off to the kitchen. Leaving the thee guys to themselves. " That probably surprised you a lot. Yes I know. They both mean well and I can see with the way Landon was acting towards you, I think it's safely to say that he also has an eye on you." Oh great.. To princes fighting over me.. She tried to shake it off. But it wouldn't go away. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Uh Oh! Who will she pick? Erik or Landon. No one knows. Except me of course. Tell me what you think!
I've got to say this is alright, considering you got this girl to continuously read a story about Kings and Queens, might be it elves. Good work, your narritive style has a quality I'm not used to but I enjoy it, something interesting. Just always remember watch out for grammar points and double check spelling... Even though sometimes that's just not enough and you still get errors. ~♪( ´▽｀)
No one can ever be the 'best', my opinion. But you can improve and learn~ Any quires don't be afraid to ask. We all had to learn and are still learning at every point.
Actually the way I wrote surprised me too. I usually hate writing in third person. But I did. I love first person. Haha but I can't switch now.
Yes it's good to get practice in both, third person gives me more of an overview but with first I can give a more in-depth advancement of certain characters. It's your story so why not try it? Might be a bit confusing and distracting but who knows