Prologue: 1... 2... 3... Lights Out. Crashes going on from outside. Shootings going on. Loud noises from the shootings. Woman screaming. All the noise hurts my head like crazy. "Where are you going, my dear?" "I'm going somewhere." "Where?" "Anywhere, but here." I looked around as the familier voice speaks to me. Something or someone throws something at me and I fall down. My eyes closes. Heyyy, guys! Sorry for my awful grammar. But it shouldn't be a big problem if you're that smart to understand them, right? But if you're having troubles with my grammaer and or spellings, please please please, correct me on it so I can fix it and check my grammar the next time I write. Hope it caught your attention! Or at least liked it so far! Please be honest and no insulting comments please! Thanks!
It's a story with great potential. Just use more details on the setting. Be sure you do spell check, I always write my updates in Notes. Just move the blinker over a word you're unsure about. Be sure you use the "" when someone is talking, it can confuse people. That's my only problem.