Poet

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Appl3man, Jul 12, 2013.

  1. I'm a poet with a these thoughts flowing in and out my mind about many different things. So post your poetry here for your future fans to see and appreciate and connect to.
     
  2. I like food,
    Food is great.
    I don't like to share,
    Not even with my mate.
     
  3. An interesting thread  I'll start. I had this in my notes catching dust. I wrote it for a song I was gonna play on my guitar but never got around to it. Here it is. No absurd criticism. 

    Can you save a life

    Your touch feels cold
    Your eyes pierce my soul
    I'm clueless of you
    You split me in two

    Empty words risin
    One less girl missin
    A boy who shunned her soul
    A girl who only loved him so
    You can't both be true

    Can you save a life?
    Can the lonely survive?
    Can you take away all the pain
    I'm hopes your life will be re-arranged
    Can you save my life?

    One man fighting
    One woman lying
    He gives his all away
    In return he hopes his girl could be faithful for one day
    Just one day

    Between all of the lies and all of the hate
    Gather yourself and just compensate all the hearts you've broken, the souls you'd shake and all the hopes you hoped to not break

    But they did.... Oh they did.

    Can you save a life?
    Can the lonely survive?
    Can you take away all the pain
    I'm hopes your life will be re-arranged
    Can you save my life?
     
  4. This thread sucks,
    And you know im right.
    Lets just close it,
    So pack it up.
    Posting here,
    Is just not right.


    There you go ⇧
     
  5. Hey if you're not interested in the thread, maybe you shouldn't post in it.
     
  6. Its a poem, i dont see how i was offtopic 
     
  7. Either way I like your creativity 
     
  8. I can't pretend anymore.
    I am ready to fly.
    Ready to be more.
    My mind is going sky High.
    Never planning to Die.
    Until I tell you whats really inside.
    I have nothing to hide.
    Girl you where there for me.
    You are my Angel.
    I want to show this nation
    All my appretiantion.
    So Girl All i want is You...
    Please dont make me look like a fool.
    Be my girl!
    And I will be your Man.
     
  9. That was very cute and beautiful, I love it 
     
  10. THANKS
     
  11. Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    COD is awesome
    I need a life
     
  12. Best poem ever 
     
  13. Randomness from me :D

    Do you care? Am I nothing but someone who was meant to spare those feelings that you bare? Was I a mistake that just dragged you down and made you think of all those mistaken love affairs? I am just the poison that taints your air. As you sit there in that chair, must you stare at me with blatant despair? I am aware of your lost dreams, for they have ensnared me beyond compare. I apologize for all the trouble I have cost, so please don't spare me. I know that you don't care.

    Written By: Natasha
     
  14. Roses are red,
    Violets are Blue,
    1D is gay,
    And I hate you 
     
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  16.  SPAGHETTI 

    The end
     
  17. The boy with the wings
    Is too shy to cry
    While dreams of pretty things
    Will never come alive
    And the girl with the kicks
    Is always up to her tricks
    While the hand on her clock
    Is just about to stop
    The boy is always the same
    So full of shame
    Falling and falling
    And never calling
    His mother waits by the door
    And it's already half past four
    And the girl is supposed to be in bed
    But she's out exploring instead
    City lights, so bright
    Board under her feet
    She's so full and free
    And the boy's in a panic
    As the girl flys around the door
    And swerves in the street
    Where they finally meet
    And it's half past four
    And the girls father
    Waits by the door

    Hope you enjoyed.
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