Hello! This is my very first RP so I'm gonna lay down some ground rules 1. Don't be invincible (e.g. -dodges fire arrows and runs away like the Flash) Healing spells and potions only! 2. I will accept pictures of your character, especially if they are anime! 3. Have fun! There are a few classes you can choose from: Princess Warrior (Princess optional) Prince Elvish Prince/Princess Human Peasant Here is my profile, make sure it looks like mine Name: Anna Redwood Age: 16 Looks (sorry no picture): Long chestnut brown hair and green eyes Type: Warrior Princess Personality: A HUUUUUUGE tomboy who loves nothing better than to win a battle against an enemy, Can only be calmed from a rage or cheered up from a loss is either a book or friends (awwww!) Anyway, maximum people is 6
Six people? And that appearance description was poor. There is no plot. Read some of the other rp's to get a idea of how to develop this more. Because right now, this is generic.
I'm getting sick of these noobs who come on here and make poorly written role plays which lack description.
Oh Gawd. This 'role play' makes me want to stab myself with a compass. ,_, And Aiko, you're being sarcastic right? I'm slow today...
Almost vomitted when i saw this. Awful.... U need a firm plot BEFORE u post on Forums. Plan before u act
hey don't dog on the newbie. I know it's not legit, but offer some advice instead of trolling on the thread, that won't do anything. 1st you need a plot, make sure it's detailed and interesting not to mention unique. Not a cliché those will probably get you no where. Make it more diverse with your characters too nothing so simple (ex: prince, princess, warrior). Put some creativity in it, 2nd the rules need to be laid out, and more absolute. They need to make more sense...and flow along with the plot so it's more reasonable that way. 3rd your skeleton needs a bit more description. Most of the time your skeleton will be unique and more based on your plot.Your skeleton should be the one that most people in the rp look at for a 'reference' of what you want it to be. You didn't think this out, so let's face it, it's not good. You need to go back and rethink things before you post. You can team up and are collaborations for ideas and help in making an rp. That's ok too, but for you to make something like this...you need to go back and plan it out before you decide to make a thread. I advise you to try checking out other rps, and seeing how it's done or try getting into an rp yourself. I look forward to seeing an improvement...I have to agree with the others on this, but I thought I'd give you some advice before you decide give up. So keep trying? I think this would've made an excellent rp if you put more thought into it. (Plus, you want a lower maximum on people. 2-4 is ok if the players are willing to commit to them. With 6 characters as a max? That's unreal and terrible. I wouldn't think of anyone willing to commit to 6 characters) Luck