ReVeNgE

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by YouDigMyHardBaby, Jun 27, 2013.

  1. I had her in my arms and pleading for my mommy to awake from her sleep i mean she was sleeping. There was warm liquid coming from her stomach and she wasn't breathing i knew she was gone and the murder was out to get my family after all her killed my daddy and im only 8 at this point. When im old enough i will find him and with get my revenge. Revenge is sweet and sneaky. No body kills my mom and dad and get away with it.
     
  2. Lyke dis if u cry every tiem :(
     
  3. He turnded ar0nd.
    nd his gysal wuz ded.
    he cry 4 4 hourz

    Lyke dis if u cry 4 hourz 2.
    ;(
     
  4. Sorry, after -8-'s post there's no way I couldn't.
     
  5. I have no clue what it even said.....there are too many errors to even begin giving advice.
     
  6. Part 2:

    My sister and i creep into the moonlight forest and we see and dark tall figure. The figure looks really buff and its holding a weapon of some sort. My sister and i approach it from behind and attack the figure draws it weapon and blindly slashes through the air it. We dodge it then all of a sudden it drops the weapon and drops to the ground. He looks up with red gleaming eyes his teeth like canines. He gets up and bites my side and turns and digs his claws into her and pulls them up from her stomach to shoulders she lies there dead. The bite hurts will i survive?