Okey so this is the first time I actually shared one of my stories so be honest in the comments on what you think!! Thankies hope you enjoy! ?? Dawn,Amelia, and Eli are all on a trip to London, they just got off the plane and are headed to the hotel. As they ride in their dad's limo, Dawn stares out the window smiling at the sight of London. It has always been Dawn's dream to visit London and it has finally came true. "it's so.....amazing." She said in a soft low tone. Eli nodded at Dawn as he looked out his window. "And the ladies are pretty amazing looking too." He responded with a grin. Dawn and Amelia both laughed shaking their heads as they approached the hotel, Dawn smiled brightly at how nice the hotel looked outside, she knew it must be amazing inside. They all stepped out the limo as the driver opened their door, as they approached the two big gold and very clear glassed door opened by two tall like men dressed in an gold and red uniform and hat, "Welcome." One of the men said as they walked in. Eli and Amelia went to check in, at the desk the desk there was a normal height woman with black hair that was up in a bun, wearing her golf and red uniform, instead of pants like the men she wore a red pencil skirt. Dawn wondered around a bit not leaving Eli's sight, as she looked around she seen two black expensive looking couches in the middle of the hotel lobby around an glass coffee table that was oval like with an vase of flowers in the center of it. Before she could look any further Amelia grabbed her arm. "Hey, Dawn stay close you're dazing off and wondering around like you always do. Look Elu has our room key, lets go and get settled in. Sounds good?" She nodded following her and Eli to the gold elevators. They walked into the gold and red elevators, ridding up to the fourth floor "this place looks amazing! I can't wait to see our room!" Dawn said excitedly looking at Eli and Amelia. "Me either Dawn, I bet our room is just as outstanding as the hotel is." she replied I'm a calm soft tone as the elevator dinged opening up to the fourth floor. "Well, ladies first eh?" Eli said as he gestured his hand out the doors. Dawn laughed a bit walking out before him "room 406.....406.....406" she said as she scanned the doors walking down the hall. "There it is! Room 406!" she said excited bouncing a bit pointing at the door, Eli swooped the red and gold card unlocking the door to their room. Inside the huge room were two big beds with red and a dashing gold bed sheets and pillows. Up against the wall between the two beds were a small red and gold trimmed stand with a gold lamp and phone on it. As they walked in further they could see a beautiful view of London and two six drawer dresser up against the wall across from the beds, with a flat screen tv on the wall over them. "Ahhh, finally I can lay down!" he said in relief falling back onto the bed on the right side. Dawn laughed at Eli rolling her eyes, "Oh, you're just lazy." before he could reply they heard a soft knock on the door. "Hello, I'm here with your luggage. For the....Thomas group?" a man said as she opened the opened the door slowly. He was wearing all red uniform with one hand on the gold luggage cart bars. "Oh, um...b-bring them right in and p-place them on the bed, p-please." she said in a shaky stuttering voice holding the door open as he pulls the cart in. Dawn is a very shy girl. She isn't good at talking to people without stuttering. The man nodded as he placed their bags on the bed by the right side of the room by the view. "T-thank you." she said as she lead him towards the door. "No problem ma'am, please enjoy your stay." He smiled to her as he walked out the door. Amelia rushed towards Dawn stopping her from shutting the door. "Hey! Lets go shopping, I know I know we just got here but it's early still, and it's beautiful outside! Lets not waste away our day inside this hotel." she said full of excitement holding the door open waiting on her answer. "Yea um sure, sounds good. Wait what about Eli shouldn't we.." before she could finish Amelia cut her off yelling at him "HEY! WE ARE GOING SHOPPING SEE YOU IN A BIT OK!!" He nodded groaning into the pillow as they rushed out the door shutting it behind them. Riding down the elevator to the lobby they exited the hotel walking past their limo. "We should walk, it's nice outside and if we get lost we will just ask a cute boy for help okey?" Asked Amelia with a bright smile on her face. "Okey.... But you do all the talking you know I'm shy." replied Dawn tucking her red curly hair behind her small ears looking down. "Yea yea yea, Oh! I see a store down there lets go!" she quickly grabbed Dawn's arm running down the sidewalk towards the huge but small store, that looked like a shoe store Amelia's favorite, figuring it had a red high heal on the front of the door. As they entered the blue and gray store, Amelia gasped at the many different types of shoes. She was in shoe heaven. "Oh....my.....god!!! I-I don't know where to start!" Amelia says looking around at the many different shoes "How about.....those..?" Dawn said pointing towards her favorite, stilettos. She smiled running over to them, I went over to find some sandals to match my sun dresses. After an hour that felt like three hours we finally left the store. Amelia had six pairs of shoes! I only had two pairs. "Wow Meya, got enough shoes yet?" I asked jokingly nudging Amelia in the arm not paying attention to where I was walking. "Dawn!! Look out!!" Amelia yelled as I tripped over man's legged who was sitting on the ground, I stumbled forward ready to fall flat on my face when suddenly I feel a firm grip on my waist bringing me up an on my feet. "Careful sugar, don't want that pretty face damaged." He said in his British Mexican accent. I looked up at him, he was about 5"11 with blackish brown hair that was cut around the edges of his head, he stared at me with his hazel brownish eyes, he had an light skin tone and was muscular somewhat on what I could feel. "U-um...uh....I...thanks.." I said shyly stuttering blushing slightly as he brought one of his hands your cupping my cheek. "Shh it's alright darling I got you, the name is Camron, Canrom Delvasio. And you are?" He said staring into my hazel at the trim and light blue in the middle dark blue eyes. "I-I'm.......D-dawn....Dawn T-Thomas." I said lowly blushing hard as he stroked my cheek with his thumb. He didn't say anything for a minute he just grinned down at me with the amazing grin, oh how I just wanted to faint into his arms. And that's a wrap for today!!! Tell me what you think please please please!!! Be honest!!! Thankies for reading!! ??
I like it!!!!! ^~^ I only sound like dawn just because of the stuttering part..... I stutter when I get shy or nervous true story x3 but its good!!!!! Update it soon!!!!!!!!!! \(^~^)/
Soo here's a little something that I wrote real quick like, I know it's short but Hey! At least there's something!! Didn't want my friends and readers waiting a whole two days!! He nodded raising a eyebrow "We? You're not alone, good is someone here with you right now?" He asked curiously as he took a hand out his pockets running his fingers thru his brownish black hair. I bit my lip seeing as his muscles flexed as he did that "y-yea, my sister M-Meya she's r-right there." I turned slightly to my right pointing at Amelia, we both stared at her as she put lip gloss on not noticing we are talking about her. "Hm? You say something Dawn?" She said as she grabbed her bags stepping beside me facing Camron, I nodded looking back at Camron. "Camron meet Amelia, Amelia meet Camron. She's my older sister. He's the one who caught me from falling on my face.." I said blushing looking down twirling my fingers round each other He grinned and nodded at her turning around quickly as we hear someone something his name "CAMRON! CAMRON! There you are man I was looking all over for you." The tall boy said as he approached us, he was at least 6"1 I'm sure of it, he had light brown eyes and black hair that didn't past his ears. He had an tannish skin tone and was muscular and with a 8pack we could see, he didn't have a shirt on. "Yea man I'm over here, sorry but I saw this beautiful girl falling and I had to catch her. Alex meet Dawn Thomas and her sister Amelia Thomas. They are visiting here for a week." He said as he gestured towards us. I smiled shyly waving at Alex a bit, Amelia flipped her black hair and smiled. "Well hello there Alex." She said in her Mexican accent, he smirked at her "Hello to you too, my pleasure to meet you...both." He said stepping a bit closer towards her.