poetry

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Rise_Of_The_Fox, Jun 26, 2013.

  1. I'm back for a bit and I've switched from my usual stuff to poetry. I want to see what you guys have. 

    Just a warning, fanfic is currently reminding me of a place where souls go to die so please don't be a little asshole and post uneducated and poorly structured pieces.
     
  2. Empty
    Grey
    Plain
    Lack of thought
    Long silences separated
    By bursts of thought
    Quickly killed
    My nonchalant mood
    Preventing me from wanting
    To move
    To breathe
    To roll over and sleep
    Disallowing me dreams of you
     
  3. Pretty good, I must say. Female Edgar Allen Poe
     
  4. Wet Bread.
    I don't quite understand,
    what my poetry has in hand,
    it's seems as though it could be grand,
    but always turns out to be bland,
    washed away like beach sand.
    By a strong tide,
    rock particles taken for a ride.
    To a place unknown by those who glide,
    high up in the sky.
    Far away from our land,
    from our ocean and rivers and lakes alike,
    where the words that I write,
    can take flight.

    I suck at poetry .