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Frost settled on the branches above my head as I sat on one of the many benches at the park. It was snowing lightly and the park was alive with the call of winter. I remember seeing him for the first time walking out from in between two skeletal trees, light shining behind him because the leaden skies had just parted to give way to the sun. He, I remember, looked incredible. Glorious, even, with light set upon him. I’m not really sure but I remember being unable to define him clearly because the rays of light were bouncing off the frosty ground, reflecting bright flashes that were as white as snow. “You dropped something,” he told me with a charming smile. He picked it up from the ground – yet, I still couldn’t see his face. “I’m Andrew Smith by the way.” “Tiffany Laurence." I replied.
“Drew! Stop! That tickles!” I giggled, covering my face. “It’s so cold!” I whined. “Baby, please stop!” One winter has passed since I first met him and we are currently out on a skating rink, skating hand in hand. I kept trying to avoid him as he chased me down the rink, one of his arms wrapped around my waist as I teasingly tried to escape from his hold on me. I could feel his hot breath brushing against my neck, and I was adoring the overflow of attention that he was giving to me. He made me feel like I was the centre of his world. He made me feel loved. And he made me feel beautiful. “Drew, sweetie,” I said in my cutest voice. “Don’t you dare do that. No! Don’t! That’s not funny!” I made a noise as he shoved some ice down my back. It was so cold that I could feel my entire body tense up from the unfavourable intrusion. I started to move about wildly and I almost fell off my skates as I moved, but Baek was holding onto me, fortunately, so I was in his hold the entire time; in his strong arms as winter’s snow fell from the tenebrous skies. He held me tight and I hugged him back and I got the feeling that he would never let me go. The wind was blowing, passing icy winds. But Baek made things different. His touch made me feel immune to the cold. “I’ll warm you up,” he whispered into my ear. I held onto him and I smiled against his chest when I noticed a commotion up ahead. A crowd was forming. “Angelina!” somebody screamed. Everyone then started to scream in delight. “Angelina, she’s so beautiful,” my boyfriend breathed. “Yeah, she is,” I agreed, my eyes closed and against his chest.