Time Flies By

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by xXxBeaXxX, Jun 21, 2013.

  1. I'm new at this so take it easy on me leave ur comments and stuff on what you think I should change and if I should keep going thanks ツ
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    Intro:
    Theres always that one person you have hung out with in the past that comes to mind well.. James was that person for me. As kids we would play together in the grassy medow close to a river. I never understood why almost every dream I had was a flash back on the past. Playing the the medow close to the river me and James played all day till it was time to go home. We would still be bestfriends if only I hadn't moved so far away from him and his family.I haven't seen him since 3rd grade.I wonder what if my dreams are a sign of something that might happen in the future? I'll just have to find out.

    "Hunny!!" I wake up to the sound of my mom wakeing me up for school. A new year, I hope I get to see Isabel, Susan and Marry I said to myself. "I'm up!!!" I said. I quickly get up and get ready for another year of highschool. I finish getting ready and I go downstairs and out to my car I get in and start driving to school.

    I park in the student parking lot and look around "geeze, theres more student than last year" I said to my self quietly. I start walking inside the school building, I get out my papers that say where my locker is and my classes. I put my bag in my locker "Boo!!" I jump and turn around only to see Isabel, "Isabel!!!" I yelled in excitement. We both jumped up and down hugging each other. Then I hear my locker shut so
     
  2. Sorry I didn't get to finish but thats what I got so far :/
     
  3. Interesting, just more details and separate your paragraphs .
     
  4. Alright thanks