hell comes around

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *UltraViolet_ (01), May 8, 2011.

  1. I had always had an aventuraus mind since prom.
     
  2. I walked in silence as I took out my ninja stars and aimed carefully at Vinnies head.
     
  3. Kiro came around the corner and tried to kick me in the rib.
     
  4. But as well nothing splatters until the egg of tge Bunin skull fall like I did making the mustake of depending on my natural ninja skills.
     
  5. I don't get it. Better grammar please?
     
  6. Ok this isn't working I need ideas post them please.
     
  7. This is a place to show your creativity in your own stories. Not steal ideas from everyone else, and try to form it into a grammatically incorrect story.