Prologue: _______ "Ava sweetheart, it's mommy. I'm gone right now, and i'm sorry i cant be there for your 9th birthday tomorrow, but I will always be with you. I love you. Tell daddy I love him too" "Daddy! Daddy!" I yell running to my dads room. "What is it Ava?" He asks. "Mommy told me that she loves me" I say smiling. My dad picks me up and sits me on a chair. "Now Ava, mommy s no longer with us. She can't talk to you" he replies. "But she did daddy. And she said she loves you too,...... MOMMY!!!!" I point to my mom, glowing in the hallway. "See daddy! I told you mommy was here!" He looks at me surprised..."I was hoping you wouldn't get it..." He says "Get what?" I ask confused. "The Curse" ---------------------------------------- "Come on, babe, you're crazy. The house isn't haunted" my soon-to-be-husband replies. "It is. I... Saw ghosts" I say. "Where?" He asks. "Nevermind, forget it, you're right it's crazy..." I answer and walk to my room. "Ava" "Avvvvvaaaa" "Come play" they call. "Leave me alone!" I cry. I grab my car keys and run out of the house. I drive as far as I can. Why did this have to happen to me? Why me? Why did I have to have the curse??? My curse: communicating with the dead
. .This actually looks pretty interesting and cool, and I don't like most stories here. Just try and be more detailed, proof read and put grammar/punctuation in speech in future updates. Just a suggestion, though.