future my song

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by PugLover, Jun 15, 2013.

  1. Ive been thinking an I've been going crazy over something i don't think ill ever know
    But my heads spinning round and round brains jumping up and and down going crazy
    Cause i wanna know what my future holds so future come to me now come to me now
    Tell me tell me what i wanna know tell me whats down that road god made for me tell me whats lighten at the end tell when my mark in history begins cause my heads spinning round and round brains jumping up and and down Tell me tell me what i wanna know Tell me tell me what my future holds I've been so crazy and broken down crying laughing so many thoughts running though my head i just want to know if I'm suppose to be something else if I'm doing something wrong so tell me tell me what i wanna know tell me tell what my future holds i just wanna know whats down that road god made for me cause my heads spinning round and round brains jumping up and down I'm going crazy thinking bout it so curious
    Head swarming with thoughts and things i want and need things i did or wanna do so plz just tell me what i wanna know tell me what my future holds


    Tell me what u think
     
  2. Tell me what u think plz
     
  3. Sucks ass.
     
  4. Sounds extremely repetitive.
     
  5. Please don't make the people your forums your Music critics :roll: Another thread might get as considered spam :roll:
     
  6. You should have put it in poem format

    Would have made it easier to read. It's a ok song actually
     
  7. Post them in one thread.

    Nice songs tho.
     
  8. You should make a chorus for my song 
     
  9. Whats ur song
     
  10. I quite liked it. Hard without hearing it to music but I liked the lyrics
     
  11. It's pretty decent
    I tried singing the lyrics and it actually works
    Good job
     
  12. It was awful the second time as well.
     
  13. Music requires a thing called sound. Writing songs and expecting people to give feedback without knowing the beat or rhythm is absurd.