my new song no regrets

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by PugLover, Jun 15, 2013.

  1. You were my world my everything i gave u my heart
    An you strung me along like a catchy song
    Told u my feelings and u said we weren't meant to be
    It was like snow white and the huntsmen but this time
    She didn't escape the knife he told me to forget but
    I'm never gonna forget anything cause everything happens for a reason
    U only got one life to live so I'm living and not regretting cause
    How would we know what we gain if there wasn't pain
    So i remember all the pain all the smiles and tears an the laughter too
    My best friend for three years tells me out of the blue that
    That shes moving oh how that broke my heart she was my wall
    When i broke down she knew how to make it better with just a smile
    So i spent the day by her side thinking how i was going to live with out her
    I was moving too but didn't wanna say good bye so i said see u soon best friend
    I gave her a hug and said i need u and i don't want u to go but i knew that she had to
    I was like half of me was gone so many nights i cried my self to sleep there was something
    Missing and it was her but I'm going to remember everything no regretting anything all the
    Memories the laughs the tears the pain and even fear cause it makes me stronger
    Ive got one life and I'm going to live it with mistakes and pain and I'm not regretting anything cause its okay to have pain i wouldn't know what happiness is with it
    Oh i have one life so I'm not regretting anything


    Tell me what u think
     
  2. You wrote this?
     
  3. What's the story of this song?

    For Ex: The A Team by ED Sheeran.
    'The story of the song was there is a girl that was abandoned and nothing to get money in, she tried to beg everyday and chose to sell love to other mans. The singers turns that angels/women should be respected and loved truly and this song are for women.

    Sorry if I have grammar mistakes.
     
  4. Um its about how u one life and how u cant have regrets and how a girls gets her heart broke and half of her gone but she still is remembering cause it makes her stronger
     
  5. Wow i love it its really good ur talented10/10
     
  6. This song was written by jake Francis in 1994
     
  7. Thanks guys
     
  8. Eh, its okay, lyrics need changing a bit and you would need a decent sound track with a pretty fast bpm to make this sound good. Either that or you do it acapella, legenth out the song abit probably be alright
     
  9. Yeah it does cause i still need a ending but its okay
     
  10. Tell me what u think plz
     
  11. Tell me what u think and read it plz
     
  12. It sounds awful in my mind.
    I think I missed a few keys are forgot the words.
     
  13. And the its like hard to sing u have to go fast then slow but its actully easy when u get the feel of the song