Memories…

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Kellin_Queen, Jun 9, 2013.

  1. This is my first fan-fiction. Plz no rude comments.

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    ιɗк ωнαт тσ ɗσ. ωнαт αм ι? ι'ɗ ℓιкє тσ αηѕωєʀ тнαт муѕєℓƒ. ν.ν *ѕιgнѕ* єνєʀутнιηg ιѕ ѕσ ċσмρℓιċαтєɗ >_> υ αѕкєɗ… ωнαт αʀє υ?? ιɗк ωнαт υ αʀє αηумσʀє!! ι ℓαιɗ тнєʀє ιη вєɗ ċʀуιηg… тнιηкιηg…ι αм α gιʀℓ ωнσ ωαѕ ℓινιηg нєʀ нαρρу ℓιƒє υηтιℓ тнιηgѕ ωєηт ѕσ ωʀσηg… ησ σηє υηɗєʀѕтαηɗѕ му ℓιƒє. υ тнιηк ι ċαʀє αвσυт муѕєℓƒ вυт ι ɗσηт. ωнєη ι тнιηк αвσυт σтнєʀ ρєσρℓє ι тнιηк…… ℓєт мє ѕтαʀνє муѕєℓƒ ѕσ ι ċαη ƒєєℓ тнє ραιη σƒ σтнєʀѕ… ι ʀєαℓℓу ωαηт тσ ɗσ тнαт. вєℓιєνє ωнαт υ вєℓιєνє. ησ σηє ċαʀєѕ αвσυт ωнαт ι ѕαу. ι ℓιє ѕσ υ ċαη вє нαρρу αηɗ ωση'т нανє тσ ωσʀʀу αвσυт мє. ι ℓιє вєċαυѕє ιт'ѕ ωσʀтн ιт. ησ σηє ωιℓℓ υηɗєʀѕтαηɗѕ ωнαтєνєʀ тʀυтнѕ ι ѕαу. ιт ɗσєѕη'т мαттєʀ αηуωαуѕ. ι ωαѕ тнє gιʀℓ ѕιттιηg тнєʀє ву муѕєℓƒ αℓσηє, αℓтнσυgн i ѕαт тнєʀє ωιтн му "ƒʀιєηɗѕ". ι ωαѕ ѕтιℓℓ αℓσηє. тнєу ѕтσσɗ υρ ƒσʀ мє ċυz тнєу ƒєℓт ѕσʀʀу ƒσʀ мє. тнσυgнтѕ σƒ ѕυιċιɗє ʀυηѕ тнʀσυgн му нєαɗ… ѕнσυℓɗ ι ɗσ ιт σʀ ησт? ℓαтєʀ ση ι ɗєċιɗєɗ... ι ѕнσυℓɗη'т ɗσ ιт ċυz ι ɗση'т ωαηт тнєм ℓινιηg υηɗєʀ α gʀєαт ɗєρʀєѕѕιση ѕσ ι'ℓℓ ʝυѕт ѕυƒƒєʀ ƒσʀ тнєм. тнєη ℓαтєʀ ι ʀєαℓιzєɗ.. υ ωση'т ċαʀє ιƒ ιм ɗєαɗ σʀ ησт! υ ωιℓℓ ʝυѕт υѕє мє ƒσʀ υʀ σωn gσσɗ. тнєу ѕαу... тнєу ѕαɗɗєѕт ρєσρℓє нανє тнє вʀιgнтєѕт ѕмιℓє.. ιтѕ νєʀу тʀυe. ι αм νєʀу тʀυℓу ɗєєρℓу ѕαɗ.. тнαтѕ у ι ѕмιℓє ℓιкє ησтнιηg нαρρєηєɗ ѕσ тнєу ωσηт нανє тσ ωσʀʀу. ѕмιℓιηg ρʀєтєηɗιηg єνєʀутнιηg ιѕ ρєʀƒєċт..
     
  2. Nice plot. Though it's hard to read with the fonts like that. Also double check for errors in grammar and spelling
     
  3. I can't read it with the font like that. Leave it as it normally is please
     
  4. Fonts, love... And also with the emoticons. They do not go great with stories. Xx
     
  5. And if you're writing... Never shorten your words. Never use u instead of you. :)
     
  6. ok I'll change the font and use full words
     
  7. ***UPDATE***
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    My mind was exhausted from thinking all day. I sit there thinking of all my life that is being wasted of. Why must they torture me like this?? It's been at least a year since since my life has been turned upside down. No one understood the pain I went through. I kept secrets from everyone so they won't have to worry about me. My life at home was so secretive. I was treated like I was a slave.. whipped and beat everyday if I didn't listen. Of course I couldn't help myself but slump in the corner resting until they found me. Once they saw me resting all I see is the whip being raised and lowered striking me. I always had a high tolerence for excruitiating pain, but today it hurt like hell! I fell to the ground tears streaming down my cheeks. The person who had whipped me walked away carelessly. I heard them say,"Useless piece of garbage…so stupid". If I was a useless piece of garbage then why am I still here???? I'm not stupid! More tears fell as I thought more about this. Thus miserable life willall be over… the unbearable pain.. I will never look back to this time of my life ever. So now I'm here thinking what will happen next…… As my mind wanders off.. I drift off into a deep sleep…
     
  8. Wow! Atleast you didn't use those fonts again  BUMPITY BUMPER? LOL UPDATTTEEEEEEE 
     
  9. ALSO! I want to know where you got that font...It looks beautiful 