₩ishing ₩ell Øf Broken Ðreams.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *x4FreeKilljoy4x (01), May 31, 2013.

  1. . . Trying something new... Short story here. Probably finish on Monday. Hopefully, anyway. Leave comments of constructive criticism and stuff, and thank you for reading!

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    ₩ishing ₩ell Øf Broken Ðreams.

    ༺Prologue.༻

    . . A simple wishing well, that's all it takes. To make a dream come true; fill every desire. A simple coin, penny gem, toss it down the enchanting beast.

    . . Make a wish; simple to big. Walk away, false hopes high. You doubt of any difference... And most of the time, you're correct. But what happens when a new wishing well is made, by a mysterious unknown figure?

    . . The sun was high up in the sky as the 'man' got to work. Hours passed and eventually his lifeline was built. A simple brick well with it's own very special story. The creature retreated, happy at his good work.

    . . Over a long time period, people began to realise the wishing well made dreams come true. It amazed many people, and raised the hopes for others.

    . . One night there was a storm. A crash was heard - the fatal death wish - the tree nearby falling across the brick wishing well.

    . . The mysterious figure watched from his hideaway nearby, agony clear on his face as his masterpiece crumbled.

    . . The mysterious figure stayed hidden as time passed, till eventually the people came for him. They wanted a new well, their hearts filled with greed; head filled with insanity and lust.

    . . They found the figure, forcing him to make a new miracle well. The mysterious figure was confused.

    . . Not so long ago, no one knew of his existence. Now they were forcing him to create them something that had originally been a gift...

    . . The creature was annoyed. Furious. How do humans change that easily, he thought frowning.

    . . He was forced to make a new well, and so he did. But this time something was different. To the human eye, it was 'normal', but they'd soon learn...

    . . The enchantress smirked. "Bitter sweet revenge," the creature murmured in his melodic voice. The humans had done this to him... Turned him from a nature loving flower to a fire burning craze. He was becoming what he'd tried so hard not to be.

    . . The thing he'd tried to stop others being... The thing he devoted his life towards.... Stopping it, yet conducting it...

    . . Insanity took it's toll.

    . . The once kind now crazy magician couldn't cope. The voices in his head, the hallucinations, the scars... He had to end it.

    . . His power was running out.

    . . With his last ounces of strength, the figure put a spell on the forced well, causing his final wish to take place 10 years later.

    . . A sly smile was the last seen upon the magicians beckoning features. With a whisper of a spell, he crumbled away to a thousand ashes, leaving behind a deceiving well....

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    10 Years later...
     
  2. . . Yes, the indent worked! :D
     
  3. . . Oh, and anyone get the title? :3 
     
  4. I liked it :p don't understand what you mean by "getting" the title though
     
  5. I love THHHIS.
    I am a fan. 
     
  6. . Thanks! ^-^ And it's to do with a song... ;3
     
  7. Well it's awesome. So keep going. I even have the temptation to do a story..
     
  8. . You should! And I'll update tonight, or early tomorrow. ^-^ I'm making a Roleplay out off this for another app, so I'll finish that quickly then create a new update. :D
     
  9. . . Sorry, I was meant to update last night but I fell asleep early. >.< I think I'll post a few long updates, instead of short ones like planned now though. Hm... Either way, I'll update later today. :3
     
  10. Bump. 
     
  11. Sorry, been really busy. Dx I gotta go again, but if anyone has Wattpad they can see it there. :3 Same title.
     
  12. Bump 