I need help on a song 

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by ltachi, Jun 5, 2013.

  1. So a few months ago I wrote songs right?
    Well. On one of the song I dont like the 'hook/chorus' I made on it (lyrics) and I can't think of anything else 


    I have the beat/instrumental on a website so if you wanna hear it and think you can come up with a catchy hook/chorus follow meh! And if we come to a conclusion, I'll include it and give you cred! If that matters.
    Or... If you can sing it and somehow send it to me and Ican include it in the song I'll feature you! I just need some help 


    It's not a rap beat or anything so don't hate on my choice music >:0
     
    #1 ltachi, Jun 5, 2013
  2. Lol
     
    #2 DemonicHypnocat, Jun 5, 2013
  3. Make a theme song Agent J ?
     
    #3 War-King, Jun 5, 2013
  4. ?I wanna buy it when it gets finished
     
    #4 tO-Adriane, Jun 6, 2013
  5.  Send it to me? I'm super creative.
     
    #5 Player11171305, Jun 6, 2013
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    #6 -_A_-Justin, Jun 6, 2013
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    #7 Player11171305, Jun 6, 2013
  8. This looks INTERESTING
     
    #8 x-D, Jun 6, 2013
  9. Swag ... In a bag... With some lag... And don't forget the hag! Or else you'll gag! Just like mag!
     
    #9 SVG-TheFaLLenFenrir-, Jun 6, 2013
  10. Art is a wonderful thing, never finished from the artists point if view, only deserted. Many would be amazed but the poor artist is not content.

    As your open to critique I have no doubt in your ultimate success. A sign of a true artist.
    Wish I could help, I'm a idiot at music.

    Nice track
     
    #10 IceEngel, Jun 6, 2013
  11.  Jopi is obviously unaware of my musical geniusness.
     
    #11 Player11171305, Jun 6, 2013
  12.  Auto correct.. Jopo
     
    #12 Player11171305, Jun 6, 2013
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