Is this any good?? be honest

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Forgotten-1308, May 14, 2013.

  1. Perspective:
    Blood rained down from the sky
    We rejoiced
    You and I
    Dancing in the rain, with the pitta patter of feet
    As music filled the air
    We flew
    You and I
    Weaving patterns through the bleak, grey sky
    A lone speck of colour in a dark world
    Wing flapping furiously, only to be beaten down with blood
    We cried
    You and I
    Mourning that loss of something that was never ours, never could be and never was.
     
    #1 Forgotten-1308, May 14, 2013
  2. 

    I liked it 
     
    #2 ltachi, May 14, 2013
  3. Marvellous!!
     
    #3 *--Jerk-- (01), May 14, 2013
  4. That's really nice. 
     
    #4 -TGS-_-BlueSin-, May 14, 2013
  5. Dude that's just depressing write about something happy
     
    #5 That_Witch_BunBun, May 14, 2013
  6. Nice... But I'm sure you knew it was good you just needed those extra compliments

    But it was really good
     
    #6 GeeGee27, May 14, 2013
  7. Didn't read it but ima post




    Your Welcome©
     
    #7 *PIMD-Enemy-Number-Three (01), May 14, 2013
  8. GOOD
     
    #8 NiCk1357, May 14, 2013
  9. Amazing.
     
    #9 -Elite_SpankingQueen-, May 14, 2013
  10. It's soooo good!!(I actually sang it o_o)
     
    #10 CookieMonsterx, May 14, 2013
  11. good!
     
    #11 Meagan, May 14, 2013
  12. I liked it
     
    #12 Miggins23, May 14, 2013
  13. Sucked. Jk
     
    #13 buddage, May 14, 2013
  14. It's good but depressing
     
    #14 That_Witch_BunBun, May 14, 2013
  15. I like the fact that it's raining blood. Makes it colorful.
     
    #15 -Abusive-Pope-, May 14, 2013
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