...that seems a bit...fast...eh? Like, if she was in a relationship for awhile you'd think he'd be a jerk after the honeymoon phase wore off. A couple of mistaken words, through instead of threw, for example. Also some capitalization, like i instead of I.
MINI UPDATE TILL V POSTS! ***Alex POV*** I couldn't believe this! She was flirting with Karl! Right infront of my face. That skank! Who could she do this to me?! I gave her everything this past year. I made sure she was happy, and this is how she repays me?! "Babe? what's wrong?" "Don't you "babe" me! What's going on between you and Karl?!" I spat "Nothing why?" "Don't you lie to me! I saw you too flirting!" "V you flirted with Karl?" Emily asked a little hurt. "No Em I didn't! I would never do that to you!" "Oh but you'll do it to me!" I yelled in her face. I seen her flinch in fear. I can't believe this. Is she scared of me? Why would she be scared of me? I would never hurt her. Would I? She raised her hands to her face and began to sob. I watched her, my heart softening. I hate seeing her cry. I glanced at her and saw a bruise had formed on her wrist. I thought back to this morning and how I grabbed her and held her roughly against the lockers. I gave her that bruise. What's wrong with me? "Baby I--" "No, don't please. Its ok" "But, babe..." "Alex I need to go." She grabbed her bag and walked out the lunch room, avoiding to meet my gaze with hers. I stood there in shock. I hurt my girlfriend for the second time today. I dropped my head and stared at my sneakers. I glanced at Emily and her eyes had pure hatred. It gave me the chills. She grabbed her bag and followed close behind Victoria. I have to see Victoria and make this right. I want to be able to keep her with me. I will do anything I can to keep her. Victoria Love McNicoles. I love you and nothing will ever change that. I will not let you go. Ever. Sorry if there are any spelling mistakes or improper punctuation/grammer. I am half asleep and wrote this update during school :/
Victoria's pov: -3 months later- I packed my things into my suit case. It was time to leave all these memories behind.... Time to leave Alex behind. I tore down all the pictures we had together and burned them throwing them into the waste basket. A tear slid down my cheeks, it was finally over he was gonna be out of my life for good. I wiped my tears away shaking my head. "Come on V why are you crying?" I laughed why am I talking to myself? I think I've gone insane. I continue packing smiling at the picture of Emily Karl and I. He asked her to senior prom and they became close that night becoming inseparable. They were everything I've ever looked for in a relationship, but I knew I would never be so lucky. I finished packing and laid in my bed staring at my wall. Tomorrow I would be out of this godforsaken place and onto a new life with my best friend Emily everything was gonna be perfect in the morning it was gonna be amazing. I dozed off smiling to myself as I dreamed of my new future. "V! Do you have everything?!" My mom was yelling as we rushed to get everything in order. I was scheduled to leave in a couple hours and needed to meet Emmie and Karl at the airport. "YES MOM I LOVE YOU!" I hurried downstairs giving her a quick hug. "I'm gonna miss you mom," I smiled looking into her light blue eyes. "I'll miss you too babe be careful darling," she gave me a kiss on the cheek and a tight hug, she let go watching me run to my car climbing in. I drove off to the airport and soon met Emily and Karl. As we boarded out plane I looked out through the window at the city that i was leaving behind. I was headed to NYU my dream school. When i found my seat i sat down and drifted off to sleep smiling as I thought of all the amazing things to come. Emily and Karl walked hand in hand as we stepped onto the campus. "Karl babe go find your dorm well catch up with you later love you," Emily kissed Karl and it soon became passionate. "Ugh get a room," I muttered as I walked away shielding my eyes. I walked around enjoying the beautiful scenery, it was beautiful I smiled as I realized I was starting my new life. Closing my eyes I felt the wind whip my hair and I open my eyes only to walk into someone standing there. I felt strong arms grab me around the waist and a chuckle arose from the boys throat. "You should look where your going." I looked into his deep blue eyes trying to find my voice, but I couldn't he was drop dead gorgeous. "Uh-uh sorry!" I quickly stood up trying to get away from his grasp, but he held me there. "Uh I'm Victoria," I tried to smile failing miserably as I became lost in this strangers warm eyes. Enjoywho's the hot stranger