Incorrect! Haha look at this fool! He is so damn retarded that he 1. Doesn't know about the swat 2. Makes incorrect assumptions about other stories 3. Acts like he is joking to cover up that he is actually wrong. And 4. Can't make a story worth the damn so he comments hateful and stupid reviews on other stories. Haha good luck in life mate you'll sure go far with this attitude!
You know it's really childish to continue something that was simply a question that you made in to a huge one person argument. Like I said I'm done continue complaining if you want.
o.o welp, that escalated quickly. and yeah, I meant the story and the arguement. Troy, I would suggest making this a bit longer, or maybe have a rewrite in another pov? I like it, but it just feels incomplete.
It is incomplete because of a critic that doesn't know anything and accused me of being wrong but whatever I guess I'll think on another story since this one is obviously wrong.