*Anthony’s P.O.V* Have you ever wondered, can the world change in a matter of seconds? I should’ve well we should’ve. I’m Anthony, I’m usually called Antonio by family and friends mostly family. I’m a 17 year-old italian male with a bit of military training (From my uncle). If I could describe myself now it would be a bit youngish looking for someone of my age. I have straight hair that if I wanted could be gelled into some type of statute but I’m not like The Situation from The Jersey Shore. My eyes are a bit mixed color blue and green while my hair on the other hand is brownish looking. Now enough of me. It began on a sunny afternoon, in my neighborhood it’s really rare to find kids outside since kids in this neighborhood hate coming outside, I call them “The Little Vampires.” For about a week I’ve been playing to head over to “Devil’s Peak” I know a bit scary for a campout spot but almost no one has ever been there because of some stupid rumor that ghosts and other spooks lurk around that area so what I want to see a ghost, maybe get a little spook out of it. I know for sure Amelia’s gonna piss her pants even if it’s the wind she hears. I laughed to myself, thinking “I should so invite Amelia maybe Bryant, Effy, Pamela, and Luke.” Wiping my eyes, I got up and looked at my mirror beside my bed “I’m good.” I picked up and dialed Amelia’s phone number but I hate calling her because she always waited until the last second to answer which I’m about to hang up by then but she’ll answer and annoying say “Boo-yah! Got ya again.” Which I’d simply reply “You're an arse, you know that right?” Thus making her laugh like a druggie. Sorry got off-track again. She answered and did her little Boo-yah thing. Sighing, I asked “Want to go over to Devil’s Peak on Friday for a campout? I’m thinking of also asking Bryant, Effy, Pamela, and Luke. What do you say?” She quickly answered yes which is weird because she doesn’t answer anything without thinking about it first but whatever. “Cool we’ll be leaving Friday at 3 p.m.” I then hung up and proceeded with asking the other 3 with simple yes’s except for Effy who has to make everything complicated by asking questions. “So who’s all going? It’ll be better with just me and you.” She said with a bit of a pur. I felt a bit weirded out since Pam was a bit of a nun type girl “Ummm what? Bryant, Effy, Amelia, and Luke are also going.” She paused for a minute and said “Okay” but I felt a surge of fear rush through my body because with that okay I heard a bit of anger in her voice which is really rare. I quickly hung up and went to my living room which is always a dead zone when it comes to people. Turning on the TV, I decided to watch a bit of the military channel (Don’t judge me) which showed a documentary on a army base actually not too far from my house. But instead of watching it all the way through I got up and drove to Luke’s house.
Update: ~<>~~~<>~~~<>~~~<>~~~<>~~~<>~~~<>~ I hung up the phone and sighed. Usually I wasn't into thing like this. But now, now I had other motives. I looked at Pam and giggled. I knew he would be calling her any minute and my plan to make her come a rooms more, well, daring was going to be going into motion. Pam had a tiny voice when it came to talking about things like, oh per say crushes. I don't. That's why I was over here. Also why I agreeded to this scary trip when I knew Anthony would just try to scare me and I'd most likely pee myself. After she hung up we burst into a shower of giggles. I knew Pam would soon act all shy and nun like when she actualy saw him tonight but still. It was funny. Laying back I looked at her. "So Pam's, do you think you'll make a move in a the trip?" Her cheeks turned bright red and she shook her head. "Oh hevans no. I couldn't. That–that is all I'm capable of Am's." That was her nick name for me. We were good friends and we had known each other for a while. She didn't mind my tendency towards t shirts and jeans, just like I in return didn't mind her sweaters and khakis. She was, as we all said, a nun to be and I was always called the Tom boy. Though she actualy wasn't catholic and I wasn't a Tom boy. She was just conservative and I didn't like skirts. Oh well, sometimes stuff happens that really doesn't even go together. Mix and matched strangely, no one picked who they were. Or what they would do. We all had what we were labled as even though sometimes the labels made no sense. Sometimes stuff happened that you couldn't believe. Stuff that made no sense. I wish now I had realized all the truth in that lesson.
I arrived to Luke’s house in a couple of minutes. His house was so unnaturally huge though it had only a about 3 floors but looks like it has 5. The house was a red and white combo which reminded me of a red velvet cake. I knocked at his door which his mom Bridgette opened the door after 2 knocks. “Hi Mrs. Vicker, is Luke around” I said with a sweet voice since Luke’s mom was REALLY emotional and I’ve made her cry a couple times but saying things wrong. Luke’s if I must say was a total hottie, long blonde hair that waved around she was an actress in a love movie, she had light blue eyes that kinda reminded me of the sky on a sunny day, she was currently tanned so her skin was a light caramel color. “Hi Anthony, Luke’s back in the pool, so how’s school?” Luke’s mom asked trying to spark a conversation but I knew having a conversation would be like signing a contract with the devil himself since her conversations usually went on for hours and hours, I should know she and my mom are friends. “Great Mrs. Vicker school’s great” I then backed up and jump off her porch railing, landing then taking off to their backyard. Luke soon came into view but with Effy. I decided to sneak in a spook both of them or well see what they’re are doing together. I snuck into Luke’s bushes and creeped around till i had a full view of them both. I laughed silently when I found them making out which is highly likeable for them to do even when in public. I found a rock a tossed it hitting a patio chair and awakening them from their annoying embrace. “What the hell was that?!” Effy exclaimed coming up wearing a blue bikini that may have been a bit too tight for her. “It’s nothing, Ef” Luke told her with annoyance in his voice with made me laugh harder. I think Effy heard me, laughing because her eyes quickly darted towards the bushes where I was. She quickly advanced on me. I tried getting away but my shirt got caught in a branch and soon ripped off. ‘That was my favorite shirt!’ I thought to myself, getting out of the bush and crawling over to the other set of bushes. “Effy, no one’s there!” Luke yelled, making Effy laugh and hold up my shirt as if it were a trophy. “That’s Anthony’s shirt. Maybe it ripped off last time he was here.” Luke yelled again but seems Ef was in her detective mode, looking over the bushes to my shoes which I took off and snuck behind the pool and Luke. “I found a shoe, believe me now?” Effy asked. But it was too late because I got up and ran backflipping into the pool’s cool water.
good thing you wrote in paragraphs at first i was like 'waoh i cant be bothered reading' but its pre good!!! Update
Remember to put punctuation after dialogue. And it's not bad so far, except for the fact not much has happened…
Okay due b to the disappearance of my partner I'm going to make two new updates with a little suprise at the the end. Expect them tomorrow
Anyways I'm settin up a new tabby so I should have the update like tmrw. If not then I give you permission to slap me silly lol
Dude be careful I had one and it broke and I couldn't use the scream they are prone to breakage!!!!!!!