Frontlines

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Take_A_Chance_on_meAKA_PWND, May 3, 2011.

  1. book 1. Frontlines


    Let's start by introducing me and my squad, I am colonel ---- and my squad is as followed: corporal Dimitri he LOVES explosions, Adelyn she is the only female of the group, but don't let looks foll you because she'll slit your throat in a second, Charlie he's sort of obsessed with knives (he's scary), Hadess he is an odd guy but he loves his M60 and G3, Then there is half nobody knows his name but he's a bad ass like everyone else he likes explosions his best friend is Dimitri because they both snipe, Also Sophie we don't know where she came from but she's sick with an smg she's odd and stands out with pink hair and bright green eyes.
     
  2. That's 2 females. But please do go on!
     
  3. ._. So similar to my story.



    Just sayin'
     
  4. When do I come in
     
  5. book 1. Frontlines


    Let's start by introducing me and my squad, I am colonel ---- and my squad is as followed: corporal Dimitri he LOVES explosions, Adelyn she is the only female of the group, but don't let looks foll you because she'll slit your throat in a second, Charlie he's sort of obsessed with knives (he's scary), Hadess he is an odd guy but he loves his M60 and G3, Then there is half nobody knows his name but he's a bad ass like everyone else he likes explosions his best friend is Dimitri because they both snipe, Also Sophie we don't know where she came from but she's sick with an smg she's odd and stands out with pink hair and bright green eyes. After the colonal rounded up his squad he said "men we will be heading for the forest tomorrow, any questions?". His squad made an assuring nod to the colonal.



    At the break of dawn you can already see the colonal and his marching towards the dense forest. Some held thier guns tightly to thier chest, others even put thier guns on thier backs. The colonal however remained restless, upon entering the forest he felt as if they were being watched. He felt relaxed only after they reached checkpoint bravo, only upon entering bravo the squad found 20 mend dead and 30 injured, Sophie being a medic quickly went to tend to the injured first. One of sophies patients was in his cottage when a rpg blew his house away and he fell on a rock.

    While sophie and hadess checked on the injured, the colonal and Dimitri were look around for any healthy strong survivor, and among the croud was sweet little lilly, she wasn't injured but she had blood all over her, it wasn't her blood though!
     
  6. U should write more
     
  7. Yeah. I really wanna know what happens 
     
  8. *Colonel.  Not Colonal.  No such word.
     
  9. You didn't fix the mistake I pointed out 
     
  10. What was that I forgot
     
  11. Can i be in it ? Please
     
  12. Hey PWND! Nice story bro.
     
  13. I just want to add a note, females aren't allowed on the front lines of war, think about that when you write
     
  14. Uh what? I'm pretty sure they can if they are in the army 
     
  15. Can I be in it pleaaasssseeeee
     
  16. No they can't, they are allowed to
    Be behind the front lines but they are not allowed on the front lines because they are too important to the human race's survival, they are baby makers
     
  17. No females aren't allowed to actually physically fight. They're only allowed the healing and you know escorting and bringing water and such.
     
  18. Thanks Dan for showing us the answer as you normally do
     
  19.  you're welcome!