summer beach house get away(rp)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by drah23, Apr 5, 2013.

  1. Come on and join,just have to have a name and u can start rp have fun!!
     
  2. Nick:sits by the water bored of the lonely beach
     
  3. Jayne kicks Nick in the back. "The hell are you doin'?"
     
  4. Looks at jayne-um...chillin...killing time?
     
  5. He holds Nick's face down firmly in the shallow water. "You gorram forum noobs gotta read a thread or two before you post your own..." A shot to the leg without any response assures him that the forum noob is dead, and with his duty to fanfic done, Jayne rejoices with booze and loose women.
     
  6. Umm...I'm just gonna ignore that...and calm down all I did was post something cause I'm not all that into hp rp..
     
  7. 1- You have shit grammar.
    2- This plot is unoriginal and pathetic.
    3- Correction to 2: The plot isn't unoriginal because there is no plot! /).-
    4- There is no rules or detail.
    5- I'm sorry, but noooo. Learn proper grammar. ;-;
    7- You sound like a hyper 9 year old.
    8- You assume the only Roleplay is Harry Potter related.
    9- You didn't notice I skipped 6.
    10- You need to look at other popular Roleplays and how they are set out. Also, don't make a Roleplay when there's already lots on the first page. It's unfair to writers.
     
  8. -arrives at the house..Lugs my bags across the grass..Gets to the door..Knocks
    "Hello..anyone here.?"
     
  9. Opens the door-hey
     
  10. Rani! Genius!!

    Close this RP down now, please.
     
  11. ^

    The shit I just took would make a better roleplay than this.