Redemption

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by BlueHawk, Mar 27, 2013.

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  1. Bump
     
    #21 -_A_-DevilMayRhy, Mar 28, 2013
  2. I really like this, but at times I felt that the writing doesn't flow as smoothly as it could.
     
    #22 *Funnymouth (01), Mar 29, 2013
  3. Awesomeness haha
     
    #23 Southern_Angel, Mar 29, 2013
  4. Bump
     
    #24 darrinesha, Mar 29, 2013
  5. I demand an update. ;-;
     
    #25 BVBATLMCRYMAYBMTHBFMVGCB182HU, Apr 4, 2013
  6. Bump
     
    #26 Southern_Angel, Apr 5, 2013
  7. Hey guys, I'm on a trip and won't be on much until Sunday. I promise, I'll update on Sunday night/Monday Morning
     
    #27 BlueHawk, Apr 5, 2013
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