Future Girl

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Cindal, Apr 1, 2013.

  1. So I know a lot of rps are stirring up ff and some stories are popping up...just thought if write a mini-story (again) my other two died  r.i.p. but I hope I get bumped? o_O if not, bye story...it's an original so I can understand if it's o-o well yeah, hope you like it.

    Blue moon and darkened skies awaited us on the crisp summer day. We hardly did any thing, we just watched like always sitting side by side. As I walked briskly deep within the city a thought occurred. Not a care in the world for the self indulgent emotionless bastards. I spat on the concrete beside me bitterness filling my mouth looking at the sky, in agony.
    If anything I wished this cold endlessness to end I didn't want this anymore. I wanted to stop, to be reborn, but no. I looked at a stray cat leaning and scratching against a door as if begging for scraps, across the street, and I walked. I kept walking never looking back on the past but towards the future for I had no choice, the future had chosen me. Turning back I saw my friends of today waving from afar, I smiled waving back. Because my friends today, would not be my friends tomorrow. Would not be my friends...in the future.
    Part 1:
    I had awoken on a frilly soft bed covered in clothes of those I never saw before. Slowly looking up i see a girl about 18 standing above me asking a simple question.
    "Are you ok?"
    It had been so long since I heard those considerate words, since mankinds bitterness had engulfed the world I was from.
    "Yes," a simple reply emersed itself from my mouth.
    I had been confused, surely this girl wanted something from me, but what? You dont simply help a complete stranger! My head spun, my mind turned I felt as if I had seen her somewhere a dream? No. A place? No. Where have I seen her?! Out of anger and frustration I thrust my fist down on the bed next to me, yelling in a outburst from deep within my throat.
    "Damn! Who the hell are you?!"
    She took a step back, I knew what she was thinking; this girl is so strange, so weird...so so...
    "My name is Trixie," she said smiling broadly.
    I had recovered from all the shock, fear, and anxiety that had been paining me. I know where I had seen this girl. Not from a dream, no but from a vision. From somewhere in my mind I knew her not just from a vision, a memory or sorts.
    "Where am I?" The words flung themselves out in a less agitated tone, more confused and questionable.
    "I think you should rest," she sighed continuing as she pointed out a large window, across the street was a bustling city those similar of New York, but I knew it wasn't for I had came from New York. Didn't I? I was lost in thought when she said.
    "I found you in an alley, you looked hurt and tired so I carefully brought you here," she said with more confidence feeling a sense of accomplishment?
    Oh please her egotistic attitude made me want to snort at her to let her know she was less. Instead I asked a more detailed question,
    "Where is this location? What year and date is this? Why are you so...nice?"
    She took a deep breath as if a bit startled then responded,
    " I'm nice because it was how I was taught,"
    Only answering a part of my question this girl was surely mad, I opened my mouth as to so speak but her tongue was quicker.
    " New York, July 15, 2000,"
    I was in shock, 2000? Why, why am I in the year 2000?! I grasped my head 2000?! 2000?! 2000?! Until I could take this madness no longer I yelled out in a screeching tone!
    "2000?!?!?!?!?!"
     
  2. Thanks guys ill update later
     
  3. Update#1

    Passing the bustling streets by the colorless emotionless people. I turned it took time to get adjusted to the breezy streets of Manhattan. Surveying the area I had just passed by I smirked. Where would I go next? I had been given a name, the wandering mistress.
    No, I wasn't near it, sure I was a wanderer but you could never classify me that old. I chuckled slightly did I even age? Was I a vampire of this modern age...? No, such creatures only exist in fairy tales...I looked up at the sun setting sky as I sat on the grass then again I guess this is..like a fairy tale, want me to tell you? The girl wandering with me nodded slightly.I guess I will continue, smiling I progressed the story of the wandering mistress, instead I'll call her future girl...

    Part 2:

    I was in an state of complete shock, I began deeply searching my memory, why, why was I here now? July 15, 2000 I had to leave... escape. I couldnt die here.
    She looked confused for a brief moment. I looked at her as she smiled.
    "You are one too?" She quickly said.
    I rose from the bed standing up, looking her in the eyes and speaking calmly.
    "I am not supposed to be here," I said ignoring her comment completely. I saw my clothes hanging on the knob of the door, as I took a few steps and retrieved my things it happened. It occurred instantaneously, then I heard some of the last few words I would hear from this person...for now.
    "Explosion of 2100," she whispered before she had pushed me on the cold wooden floor, my jacket flashed before I heard an explosion.
    No, no,no, I had time! I closed my eyes.
    "DAMNIT!" I yelled, as I opened my eyes slowly I was surrounded by humans just staring. Agitated I strode to a nearby newsstand, I glanced at the date on the paper.
    "May 17, 1987" I sneered hysterically. Everyone stared at me as I passed them by. I expected this, no one has seen "future" clothes yet. My leather jacket glowed vibrantly as if troubled. I quickly shot for a small corner near no one, sitting on the cold gravel beneath me I breathed a deep sigh.
    "That girl...was a traveler," I huffed.
    "Yes, and I'm afraid there isn't much time left," a familiarly troubled voice said, emerging from a dark alley.
    "You," I spat at his feet.
    "I have a name unlike you number: 0015749,"
    I arose striding away from him I have a name too. I wanted to talk back and cut his throat. Instead I just walked away.
    "Don't you want to save them?" He called back.
    "Who?"