Awake from ancient slumber, ancient shadow unbound. Black wings unfurl with a hunger to conquer the world. Take to the skies as fire rages, blood red eyes follow you into the night and deadly moonlight glints off bronzed skin. Twisted, evil creatures that dwell in Earth's deepest reaches, rise up to battle in vain, and in the darkest recesses, where the living fear to tread, the bones of the dead still walk. They feel no pain or remorse, and deserve no mercy. These mutilated creatures, however, are no match for you. Fire bursts from deep within, a powerful art long practised by many of your kind. As it passes razor-sharp teeth with a bite as cold as the grave, the world around you burns. You really are a weapon of mass destruction. Defy the laws of time, for you are infinite. Please comment improvements, thank you for reading <3
Yes, but add more details. Overall, it's going great. Oh, and updates should be longer. Keep up the good work.
Oh you want me to continue it? But it's just a piece of writing its not really continuous it's just what comes it when I'm depressed <3
You should at least have a story in here, you are talented. Being depressed shows emotion and it's great to put into writing. I recommend you do.