The Tire Swing

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Renie (01), Mar 12, 2013.

  1. *A free verse poem I wrote. Please read:)

    The Tire Swing~

    We used to sway
    to and fro
    on the tire swing
    and you
    looked at me
    as though we
    could be something
    As though
    I meant to you
    And onn the eves
    near summer's end
    we would sit
    next to the pond
    listening
    to the frogs
    and dragonflies
    Summer's sun would set
    as you and I
    wondered home
    In those days
    those simple
    summer days
    I fell in love with you
    and I thought
    maybe you could
    love me too
    Summer days
    faded away
    Fall came
    as did a new day
    I could never say
    though
    and I needed you
    just to know
    how on those summer days
    I fell in love
    with you

    Swaying in the breeze
    on our old tire swing
    that was where
    you first kissed me
    and my cheeks
    were as ruddy
    As the setting sun
    and the butterflies
    Cloudeded my tummy
    and I was
    happy that you could
    maybe
    love me.

    Yet the summer
    always
    fades
    and days change
    Only stolen glances
    we our share
    but I told myself
    we could be
    and watched as we both
    grew older.

    I have loved
    you for twelve years now
    and I never had the courage
    just to say
    and she came along
    And stole you away
    You're getting married soon
    Yet
    I cannot envy her
    because i never
    had the courage
    to just tell you
    I loved you so
    like she did.
    I wish I had
    but I
    may never change
    my mistake
    as I sit
    swaying
    To and fro
    where I loved you
    and you
    first kissed me
    on those
    summer days
    in our old tire swing.

    ~Renie
     
  2. Woah...gave me chills!
     
  3. Aww, thanks! :')
     
  4. I cried that was beautiful
     
  5. Aww thanks:)! Your comment means a lot! :D