If you wanna get out alive

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Sexy_nerd-, Mar 12, 2013.

  1. This is based off a song I love listening to.

    Prologue
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    Athena's P.O.V

    "No time for goodbye" he said.... As he faded away. I thought to myself, don't give put your life in someone's hands, don't hide your mistakes they'll find you, burn you, then he said "if you wanna get out of life.... hold on to your life"


    Johan's POV

    "This is my last time" she said... As she faded away, I thought to myself, it's hard to imagine but one day... You'll end up like me then she said "if you wanna get out alive.....hold on for life"
     
  2. Hm confused but I feel a power from the words and I like that keep going

    Bump
     
  3. Bump please
     
  4. Yay! Glad you guys liked it
     
  5. Athena POV
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    I sit there and cry, and cry, and cry, though you wouldn't understand why, it was just some guy, right? Not to me.... He was an angel brought down to earth, but now he's like a devil, my heart is broken to a million pieces, I can't pick then up I'm broken. I hope I don't turn into him, I promise myself I will never ever turn into him. I get up and walk home, alone.
     
  6. Aww sad but now I know what's going on haha
     
  7. John POV
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    1 year after Athena's heart broken.

    I sit they're and stare at her. She broken the promise she gave. I know she has, she's shaking. I stand up and start screaming at her. "What did I do!!?!? To deserve this! You were my world! Was I just a speck of dirt? Or did the devil consume your mind?!? Huh tell me!" She starts walking away. Then I feel the tears falling. I don't want to admit it but. I love her. And now? I'm lost.
     
  8. Might want to make the updates larger and

    They're is -they are

    There- is what you want haha
     
  9. Bump please!
     
  10. Uh... What? Whats going on? A larger explanation would be nice, maybe a backstory if it's possible...
     
  11. Athena's POV
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    Weeks before she got her heart broken

    "Hey chad!" I say to my boyfriend, he waves, though he loves Rock music, he's so cute! I just want to eat him up! Though he has been acting weird lately.... I don't it's just a phase. I run up and hug him he hugs me back, I smell him, I love him soo much, I would die without him.
     
  12. John's POV
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    3 days before the moment.

    I could hear her soul saying to me, "it's already over now, nothing left to lose, because i don't care about you" I never believed it. But I should have, it would have saved me, I know she didn't want to do it, but she had to, for her ex, who she loved, more then me. I won't be mad, I shouldn't have been mad at the breaking, I couldn't help it, never had a girlfriend, I didn't know the feeling, so how could I control it?