My First Ever Poem...

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by -iMakeItRain-, Mar 4, 2013.

  1. Every moment without you, it's like my heart skips a beat
    Every day without you, is a day that ain't complete
    If you can look past my flaws, and possibly forgive
    That's another day happier that I shall live
    But if you can't, and want me to just leave
    I'll go, but I love you, that you can believe


    This is my first poem ever, right off the dome go easy on me
     
  2. oh my, a pretty poem
     
  3. Nice, nice. I guess I'll post one of mine.
    I never share so. 

    The boy with the wings
    Is too shy to cry
    While dreams of pretty things
    Will never come alive
    And the girl with the kicks
    Is always up to her tricks
    While the hand on her clock
    Is just about to stop
    The boy is always the same
    So full of shame
    Falling and falling
    And never calling
    His mother waits by the door
    And it's already half past four
    And the girl is supposed to be in bed
    But she's out exploring instead
    City lights, so bright
    Board under her feet
    She's so full and free
    And the boy's in a panic
    As the girl flys around the door
    And swerves in the street
    Where they finally meet
    And it's half past six
    And the girls clock
    Stops it's tick
     
  4. So amazing both poems
     
  5. I'm a little skeptical in posting my poems online 
     
  6. I love these
     
  7. Rainman??hmmm..another name for the devil ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟
    Anyway good poem
     
  8. King... I just found that out the other day did not know that when I made my account
     
  9. good goin feisty carnivore
     
  10. Oh well
     
  11. oh well stay rawring
     
  12. Rawrrmy rawr is better bud!!
     
  13. One more r That does make the rawr better
     
  14. u know it lol i shall train Yah
     
  15. When she's angry she'll take out a pack of cigarettes, light them up and let out a breath. She's mad, she's mad, seeing red, seeing her own sorry death. There's a rope and there's a knife, and she's ready to take her life. What's the use, what's the use, to keep up with this pathetic ruse? "You're not fooling anyone, sweetheart." is her mother's painful remark. The lighter burns and she slowly inhales, raking her skin with her own red nails. The smoke she breathes is the one she exhales.

    Gone.
     
  16. SORRY HAD THE URGE TO SHARE

    nice poem >w<