"The sky looks beautiful today" my mother said as we laid in the cool moist grassy knoll on a twilight day afternoon, " yeah it's relaxing,serene…" I said in a state of hypnosis, it's days like this that reminds me how insignificant we are, like little specks in a vast universe. "It's almost midnight Zero, we better leave soon" " okay and hey tomorrow I'm starting high school" "yeah, and soon you'll get yourself a nice little girlfriend, my little handsome man." My mother said giggling, I blushed. "A girlfriend, haha… no way mom" I said lying, when really, I did wish for a girlfriend "Zero…" she interrupted my thoughts, " when you do finally meet that that special someone, hold on to her, protect her, cherish her…" I held tightly onto my sword "you have my word B…" "Please don't call me B sweetheart, I'm your mother" "k sorry" my mom… who everyone calls B, nothing less, nothing more, heck, even I don't know her real name. So we got back in the car and drove home; a fell asleep halfway.
Before I update the story since I'm not good at describing people I'm gonna show how Zero looks and B look Zero: B: __________________________ " Zero, wake up" she said to me as she put me over her shoulder. I yawned still sleepy as she opened the door to the front door of the house, I closed my eyes as I started to remember on the reason on why I am going to the High School <><><><><><><><><><><><><><> "Zero, we have come to a conclusion and have decided you will be going to a school nearby as a spy" B said to me as I yawned. " your objective is to become friends with Carla Dolores and figure out what her father plan are." Jennet told me grabbing me by my shirt "sheesh why can't you send someone else I don't wanna be going to a stinking high school, I alway been home schooled" I looked at them. "If you can accomplish this mission you will become a permanent agent" Dianne said to me as she put me on a sleeper hold. "Okay I give I give" I said tapping out to the submission hold. "Good, you have 30 days to become her friends and 30 days to figure out her fathers plans." Jennet started showing slide shows of what happened 3 months ago when California was bombarded. " the girl you will go after name is Annabelle Moon, age 17, blood type negative AB, grade 11 and one of the most richest girl on the school __________________________ How Annabelle looks: Yes I'm not good at describing people so I have to use pictures to show how they look. The next update will be done at 1pm EST time.
I like it. But maybe to improve use paragraphs, a new line when someone speaks, and punctuation in speech marks. :3 For example: "I like ice cream," mumbled the dog. Cat frowned. "Dog... Shut up."
<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> I grabbed my ears. " you're confusing me, who the hell am I going after is it Carla or Annabelle?" I asked in confusion swinging my head back and forth. " huh what do you mean…" Jennet didn't finished when she realized the mistake she made. " oh shit, sorry Carla is another job going to Jack." She laugh eat when saying that. " that mission is gonna be at the same school as yours so we can kinda got them both mixed up." B told me. " stupid bitches." I mumbled under my breath. Dianne grabbed me by my waist power slamming me into a table which knocked me out. ___________________________________________ Jack Ricky age 17 ___________________________________________ Day 1: beginning I got up from my bed at 4am in the morning going for my morning jog then waited for 2 wholes hours for everyone else to get up including B,Jennet,Dianne and my dad Christopher. " good morning morning beast," Dianne came Downstair saying her usual boring jokes. " Do you know when Jack is gonna get here…?" I asked her. " he called me and told me he will be here in 5 minutes." She answered. I grabbed the keys to the car that my mom bought me last year. " you sure you wanna drive to school on a Cadillac?" Dianne asked me. I nodded starting to make breakfast for everyone else. -8:30am at school- I glanced around the principal office waiting for him to finish making my school schedule. " sorry Mr. Belarus the printer in this room isn't working so I have to print it out in the library." He told me as he got up and left the room. I waited for 20 minutes when the doors opened and she came in. " hi, is Mr. Jackson here?" She asked looking at me. I started to say something but no words came out I just couldn't believe how beautiful she. Annabelle Moon, the daughter of Mason Moon the most vicious super villain people have ever known. ___________________________________________ A heads up update for today next time I update is at 1pm eastern time as y'all know.
<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> -At Zero house 3 days ago- " Zero son, please be careful out there." My mom said to me looking concerned. " don't worry mom I won't be beat that easily, I'm the son of B the best spy I the world." I smiled at her. " if you ever need help don't hesitate to call me." She said as she handed me a blackberry phone. ___________________________________________ -present- She looked at me when she saw me. " hi there, do you know where the principal is at?." She asked me. I just stared at her without being able to say anything. She leaned forward close to my face. " I asked you, do you know where Mr. Jackson is at??" I felt her mint breath on my face as my face started to turn more red. The door opened as Mr. Jackson came inside. " sorry for the wait Mr. Belarus." He said as he saw Annabelle close to my face. " you two weren't thinking of doing anything naughty, where you two now?" I shook my head when he asked that. " good now Mrs. Moon since you're here, you're gonna help out the new student and show him around school." He told her as she kept on looking at me directly at my eyes. I got up quickly grabbing my schedule, my face fully red. " I think he is sick." Annabelle pointed out. " yeah he does look sick, are you okay Zero?" He asked me. I nodded walking out of the main office and walking into the hallway getting lost easily. " 0.0 now where am I at?" I asked myself as I looked around not seeing anyone. " you should wait for me, I'm responsible for showing you around." Annabelle came from behind me grabbing onto me. " ummm 0///0 why are you grabbing me?" I look at her blushing. " because you're so cute, you almost look like a girl." At that instant I whole body turned white, as if I was ghost fainting. ___________________________________________ -nurse office 11am- I opened my eyes, grabbing my head as it started to hurt. " good you're awake." I looked around to see a woman dressed like a nurse. I nodded still grabbing my head. " you're okay?" She asked me. " yeah just a small headache." I got up slightly weak on my knees. " Annabelle told me you just fainted out of nowhere," she said to me. I growled under my breath, looking at her. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- another heads up Update
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I walked out of the nurse office looking around confused as my head kept on spinning. I walked holding on to the window when someone came behind me. " hold your hands up, you're under arrest," I turned around to see that the one who said that my childhood friend, Raven. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><> Raven Age 16 <><><><><><><><><><><><><><> " Yo, watcha doing here?" I asked her. " Mrs. B sent me here," she said. I closed my eyes for a while grabbing a book from my book bag then I hit her in the head with it. " I don't need you here," I told her starting to walk. " come on Z, I was just joking around no need to take it seriously," " You should pretty much know by now that I really, really, really hate jokes." I grumble not looking where I was walking until I bumped into someone. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><> Snow age 17 <><><><><><><><><><><><><><> I held my hand out to her. " sorry," I said to her. She looked at me which made me step back a little bit. " Cute," I told myself when I saw her. Raven helped her up. " forgive my rude friend here, he wasn't looking where he was going," Raven apologized to her. " no it's okay it was my fault not watching where I was going." She said as she picked up her books and walked away. " you need to stop getting shy around a girl when you think she is shy," she slapped me on my back which sent a slight pain on my back. " whatever," I started walking. She grabbed the schedule away from my hand and looked at it. " seems like you,me and Annabelle have the same class." She told me. " you know her??" I asked her. She nodded handing me my schedule back. " come on follow me before we are late class," she started to run so I chased after her. __________________________ -lunch period 6- " wow it's really nice having you on the same school as me," Raven said to me as I followed her around the whole school. I just ignored her smart remarks staying quiet the whole time or reading a book. Annabelle was with us the whole time and she kept on trying to apologize to me about what happened earlier but I just ignored her not wanting to talk to her or anyone, just be by myself and planning on how to complete the mission. __________________________ -after school- School went real fast before I knew it. I had to spend the whole day trying to make up excuses on why I just transferred to this school at the middle of school year. The one answer I couldn't was the one Annabelle asked me. " why Is your name Zero???" She asked me. I dropped all my stuff at the moment she asked that question. I looked down for a second than picked up my stuff, walked to my car and drove away before she could ask any more questions. <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Next update will be at 3pm eastern time