Digimon world Crack System

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Jolteon, Mar 1, 2013.

  1. The following is a Fan made story. digimon is property of Bandi. pleas support the official Release.




    Intro
    In the Year 2013 a new MMORPG was released to everyone know as Digital monster Online. Where you raised up your digimon and can battle others online or explore the terrain. But during development an unknown program was spotted with in the programming . The developers didn't take it as a serious problem but soon the program will soon add a twist to the protagonist.


    Chapter 1
    As many of you our wondering my name is Amy. Along with my three Best friends Liz, Leo, and Ali, we are the best battlers in Digimon online. The four of us always meet after school and always played it since the day it came out. We where actually really good at it. But the one who took it very seriously was Leo. The rest of us only played it for fun. Today was the day that the launch of the new terrain will be open to the public and the four of us will soon meet after school to play it.

    As the bell rang I ran out of the class room and head towards the Computer Labs. As always Leo was there waiting for the rest of us. Liz and Ali finally showed up and we all headed inside.

    Ali: I can't wait to check out the new terrain. I herd there's new digimon to battle and brand new items too.

    Liz: yeah I herd that too. But I really want to see the arena they have there.

    Amy: yeah I herd there was going to be lots of tournaments there.

    Leo: let's stop wasting time and log on already.

    Amy: oh, sorry about that.

    We all logged on and were ready to play.

    Leo: huh?

    The screens went black and a white text box appeared on all four of our screens.

    Ali: what just happen? What is this?

    Leo: I have no idea. Maybe it's a bug.

    The screen became all static and soon the power went out. Then the screen turned bright and started to slowly digitize everyone.

    Liz: what the hell is going on?!

    The four of us where sucked in and that's where our journey begins.





    Now here's where you play along. You get to decide Amy's Digital Partner.

    Coronamon
    Type: beast
    Attribute: Vaccine
    Element: Fire
    Look:
    [​IMG]

    Hyokomon
    Type: Chick
    Attribute: Vaccine
    Element: Fighting
    Look:
    [​IMG]

    Lunamon
    Type: Mammal
    Attribute: Dara
    Element: lunar
    Look:
    [​IMG]


    Vote on which one will best be for Amy's Partner.
     
  2. This is new. I kind of curious how this will go. I think lunamon sounds like a good partner.
     
  3. Well you should try and add more details and give character description. In other words its not bad. Lunamon seems to be getting the more votes. Don't give up on this one. It's something I haven't seen in fan fic so it's interesting
     
  4. Lunamon Amy Good story so far
     
  5. Coronamon definitely. Good story keep it up
     
  6. When's the next update.
     
  7. Bump don't want this to die
     
  8. Caronamon.

    Watch out for the random capitalizing of words that don't need to be and to capitalize words that do need to be. Be more descriptive on characters, as a reader I like to know what characters look like.

    So far so good. I was more of Pokemon fan, but keep going, Digimon was my second favorite.
     
  9. It's ok. At least it wastes sometime I'm enjoying it but please be more descripted. Digimon is awsome and I pick...Coronamon :)
     
  10. Yeah sorry it was short. I was in a rush when writing this. I'll be sure to add more on the next update. Seems like lunamom got 4 votes and cronomon got 3 votes
     
  11. I'll start writing it soon tidy and add more details.
     
  12. I like it. Lunamon
     
  13. I'm sorry but lunamon is so cute!
     
  14. Guess lunamom won. I'll start writing now.
     
  15. Chapter 2


    Amy:.......

    ???: hello? Are you okay? Hey wake up!

    Amy:....mmm

    ???:Ah your waking up now.

    Amy:-opens eyes and sees Lunamon- wow these graphics look so real. I must be dreaming.

    Lunamon: I'm no graphics I'm real. The names Lunamon. Who are you?
     
  16. Amy: what? Did you say lunamom? But...-stares at Lunamon- Aaa! -jumps up- is this a dream?! Where am I?!

    Lunamom: calm down. You fell through the sky so I came to see if you where okay. What is your name?

    Amy:-looks up at sky- uhh...my names Amy. Your saying I fell from the sky?

    Lunamom: that's right.

    Amy: so what is this place. It looks nothing like home.

    Lunamon: your on the digi island in the north.

    Amy: so your saying I'm in the digital world?

    Lunamon: yup that's right!

    Amy: - sits on ground- I can't believe this is actually true... I bet everyone else.... Oh my gosh! Wheres Liz, Ali, and Leo? Lunamon, did you see any other humans fall from the sky near by?

    Lunamon: I'm afraid I haven't. Sorry.

    Amy: I see.

    Lunamom: but I know they will see you soon one day. Maybe if you look for them you may find them.

    Amy: that's not a bad idea.

    Lunamon: and your going to need a strong partner to protect you on this journey.-winks-

    Amy: haha, Lunamon, will you be my partner then?

    Lunamom: it will be my pleasure...Look out-pushes Amy out of the way-

    A shock wave came from a bush

    Amy: what was that?

    Lunamon: I can sense its dark energy. It's a crack digimon.

    Amy: Cracked? What do you mean by that?

    Lunamom: it means it's data gone bad and it tends to be very violent with everyone.

    All of a sudden an Elecmon jumps out

    Elecmon: everything must perish! Thunder strike!

    Sends another shock wave at Amy

    Lunamon:Lunar claw! -strikes at the shock wave- don't worry Amy I'll protect you. Lop-ear Ripple -starts spinning making a small vortex which traps electmon inside- That should do it.

    Electmon:-goes flying out and runs away-