I'm Not A Rag Doll

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *madelinnicoledavis (01), Feb 16, 2013.

  1. That does go really well with ur story
     
  2. I will have a update tomorrow stupid school keeps making me study! Why do we need to know all that stuff anyway? I mean half of it we aren't going to need!
     
  3. I know!
    Music?
    We have YouTube.
    Spanish?
    We have Dora
    Gym?
    We have wii
    English?
    It's basically our first language!
    History?
    They're all dead anyway :roll:
     
  4. I KNOW RIGHT! Lol short update sorry
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    JAMES P.O.V

    I held my head down as I sat in front of the king, not wanting to look him in the eyes.

    "James, you failed."

    "I need time! She isn't going to fall in love that easy," I hissed at him.

    "How long if I may ask?"

    "A month or two at the least! You have to give love time sir," I pleaded. I knew that love didn't need time. Not between us anyway. She wasn't to love me and as much as I hate to say it, I won't let her.

    "Fine. Let me just speed up time than," he smirked.

    "WHAT?! NO NO NO! THAT IS NOT WHAT I MEANT BY GIVE LOVE TIME!"

    He couldn't! Speeding up time could ruin our friendship! No not could, WOULD ruin our friendship.

    "To late James. Next time don't lie to me," he said with every word coming out as venom.

    I shook my head in disbelief. How did he know?

    "Is there another option," I asked quietly and a little hopefully. Please have another option.

    "Yes..."

    "What is it," I yelled excitedly. I won't mess things up after all...

    "We go back in time and you actually kiss her this time. This plan has to work James or your sister will be killed and I will be happy at any moment to let her head fall off. The same will happen to you also if you don't follow orders, got it?!"

    I gulped and nodded as tears threatened to escape my eyes. They couldn't kill her. Wether I like it or not, I will have to betray Taylor.

    "Good. Hold on to my hand now James."

    I did as I was told and we were flying back in time. It's really difficult to explain. Since we were only going back to earlier it was just a quick flash of... Lights? Memories? Events? Not sure what they were myself.

    I found myself on the ground groaning from the pain and not being able to see from a bright light. I also couldn't hear that well and felt nauseous.

    I sighed and began rubbing my head to relax myself and the pain slowly oozed off.

    I sat up to see my former self turning around. It wasn't me though because I was here... It looked more like a ghost really.

    I followed it into the house and saw Taylor. She looked real. How come she didn't notice the ghost?

    "James."

    And well y'all know how the conversation goes from there... Now I was up against her and my hands where on her cheeks.

    My former self was whispering"I can't do this."

    Here goes nothing. I looked one last time into her eyes which were full of confusion.

    Suddenly, a message appeared in my mind.

    JAMES, I REMEMBER THE CONVERSATION AND I KNOW THEY SENT YOU BACK. I WILL HELP YOU OKAY? WE CAN FIGURE OUT A PLAN TOGETHER AND I KNOW THEY'RE WATCHING SO LETS GIVE THEM A SHOW.

    I nodded and felt relieved. She knew! Our friendship wasn't ruined and she thought I was doing this because I have to... So it's a win win right?

    Then she leaned in and whispered"When all of this is over don't let our friendship be awkward okay? I just don't want anyone to get hurt and I know how much you care about your sister and I care about you and I know you are doing this because you care about me. I am so glad I have a best friend who cares."

    She leaned in and I watched as she moved away from the wall so she was closer to me.

    Suddenly she began coughing and choking. I gasped and held her so she wouldn't fall. I knew this would happen...

    "It's all my fault," I cried"I shouldn't have gave you that potion when we were little! I thought it was tea just like you asked for! He tricked me and it's all my fault!"

    I tried using my magic powers with no success . I had one other option... Bring her to the nurse...

    I picked her up bridal style and carried her to the nurse. Great just great. What will they think?

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    Again, sorry it was short
     
  5. its ok and is really good!!!!!
     
  6. ..EXACTLY!
    I'm just so glad I'm not in HS anymore
     
  7. Ugh I hate it! Stupid tests r awful
     
  8. TAYLOR P.O.V

    I woke up in a white bed with blue walls and a red ceiling. Hmm. Wonder why I was in here?

    I sat up and instantly regretted it. I groaned as my head pounded and my stomach felt as though it dropped.

    "Tay lay back down."

    I nodded and close my eyes once more without looking at the person talking to me.

    Wait... Am I that dumb?! It could be one of those people trying to get me!

    I shot up, my eyes wide. I sighed in relief as I saw James.

    He looked at me strangely and I gave him a small smile.

    "I thought..."

    He nodded to say he understood"I'm sorry for getting you into this mess," he murmured and closed his eyes.

    "What are you ta..." I was interrupted by a door slamming open.

    I turned to see the king and instantly stiffened. I could do nothing to fight back, for I was to weak.

    Poor James was blackmailed into getting me to love him. I'm so lucky he told me though, I would have fell for it if he didn't.

    "WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?! WE HAD A DEAL," James screamed as he jumped up from his feet.

    "Yes I know but seeing as you didn't cary out the deal and it's been two months...," the king replied looking at me.

    "I HAVE BEEN OUT FOR TWO MONTHS?!"

    "Yea you have...," James muttered.

    After that everything happened so fast. James was fighting a they tried pushing him out of the room and they grabbed me.

    I screamed the best I could to James. They managed to put him out of the room. It took three big men!

    "I WILL COME FIND YOU TAYLOR! DON'T WORRY I'LL COME BACK!"

    Those were his last words before he was pushed away from me. I screamed louder and began to cry. No no no no no no! I can't cry!

    After many failed attempts, I calmed down. I was blindfolded and I could feel them all around me. As though I was worth more than the president.

    I sighed and let them lead me to their car, where they tied my hands and and feet together.

    Soon we were at the place they were taking me. Where was it you ask? No idea! They wouldn't tell me on the way here! Those stupid b******...

    They led me into a room and handed me some clothes. They then untied me and took off my blindfold.

    "I am NOT wearing these," I hissed.

    "You will do as your told got it?! You don't have any of your special strength or any other powers and won't ever have them again," they hissed back.

    "These clothes are WAY to revealing!"

    "Exactly the point."

    I growled and stood exactly where I was. They are not going to win this battle. No way in hell.

    I watched as they left the room and slammed the door. I smirked knowing I had won.

    I paced around the room until somebody opened the door. It was a girl. Younger than me by the looks of it.

    "Hello what's your name," I asked sweetly.

    "SHUT UP YOU LYING PRAT," she screeched.

    I blinked in shock. Who does this girl think she is?!

    "Look here little girl," I started but didn't get to finish before she growled at me.

    "I am NOT a little girl! I am over three hundred years old! In case you haven't notice my teeth and paled skin, I'm a freaking vampire!"

    My eyes widened. No no no no no. I hate these... Things!

    "NOW GET DRESSED IN THIS BEFORE I TEAR YOUR HEAD OFF!"

    I grabbed the clothes and hurried off into the bathroom to change. These clothes were a lot better than the old ones. It was a tight spaghetti strapped shirt and shorty shorts but I was fine with that.

    I walked out after brushing my hair and teeth, afraid of what this thing would do to me.

    "By the way my name is Sophie," the girl muttered under her breath while pulling me out of the room. I nodded and she pushed me to some guy and whispered something that sounded like"Be careful, she's dangerous."

    I smirked. D*** right I'm dangerous!

    The guys pushed me through some curtains and on a stage. That's when I began yelling.

    "LET ME OUT OF HERE YOU B*******! I AM NOT A F****** RAG DOLL YOU B*****! I AM NOT GIVING IN THIS EASY! S***, I AIN'T GOING TO EVEN GO TO A STRANGERS HOUSE FOR THEM TO USE ME AS A F****** TOY! I DEMAND FREEDOM! I WILL CALL MY MOM FROM
    THE DEAD AND I KNOW Y'ALL WON'T LIKE THAT WILL Y'ALL?! HEY MOM, YOU CAN STOP HAUNTING THE KING! YOU CAN COME HAUNT THE F****** B**** WHO DECIDES THEY WANT TO BUY ME! GOOD LUCK WITH THAT," I screamed with anger while trying to escape.

    "Feisty one huh? Well who's up for the task," the spokesman asked. I turned until I saw him.

    His eyes widened in shock as I ran to him. I pounced on him and punched him in the face over and over.

    Someone pulled me off and I immediately turned and began to punch that guy until someone came behind me and grabbed my wrists, holding me back.

    I growled and kicked the guy until he fell down. I kicked him in the head and his breathing slowed, showing he was unconscious.

    I turned to the other guys who stood in shock. I laughed and kicked the guys constantly until I kicked them unconscious like the other guy.

    I turned and ran until I could see an exit. Of course I have always had bad luck.

    I felt a sharp pain in the back of my neck. I screamed and fell on the ground.

    "Good job Sophie. Your lucky someone wanted to buy you," the guy above me hissed before I fell in a deep sleep.

    I woke up in a bright lighted place. Where was I? I looked around. All white... But I know it's defiantly not a hospital because blood is dropped on walls and I'm chained to the wall and laying on the floor.

    A door opened and I looked to see a guy in his 40's. What the... Oh wait... He must be the poor soul who bought me.

    "I will escape! My friend will find me. He loved me! He'll get me out!"

    "Aww young lovers. Poor things got separated did ya'?"

    "It's not like that love you b******! It's brotherly, protective love! I bet you wouldn't know anything about that though, right?"

    "Don't talk to your master that way!"

    "Or what," I questioned while smirking.

    "Or this," he came and slapped me in the face. He then took a knife out of his pocket.

    "Are you going to deny me any longer?"

    "I WILL ALWAYS DENY YOU!"

    "Thats not very nice is it?"

    He cut my arms deeply. The blood dropping out of arm slowly at first and faster as it opened more.

    He sat on me so I couldn't move and I looked away from him. I didn't want to see his hideous face. Thats not what he wanted though. He pushed the flat end of the knife against my cheek so I was force to look at him.

    "What was that you said earlier? You're not a rag doll? Guess what sweetie, you are! A rag doll is a toy am I correct?"

    I nodded my head, my stomach hurting from his weight.

    "Well you are a toy then Taylor. Actually you are a special toy. A very special one indeed. Now you are going to make this easy got it? The type of toy you are is the best."

    I widened my eyes. No no no no no no.. Not that kind of toy! I haven't even had my first kiss yet and he was going to do this?!

    As you can see, that night was the worst night I've ever had and the beginning of my new life.
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    Okay the next one will be a couple years later. Enjoy!
     
  9. ok then ew and yet i cant stop reading
     
  10. Yes I know its ew I had to write that though because what happens to get now is important later
     
  11. Ok I will try and have an update by tomorrow and today if possible
     
  12. *ELEVEN YEARS LATER*

    TAYLOR P.O.V

    I am surprise they have kept me this long but their is plenty of people who want someone like me. Apparently being skinny because you have some disease no one will tell you about is "Hot".

    What disease do I have?! I know I have one because every day I am getting skinnier and skinnier and my current master won't heal me even though he is a healer.

    So much for good manors right? Right now I can't help but think, what would have happened if I stayed home that day or stayed at that little garden.

    Would I still be here? Probably. Would it have been worth me having to run for my life instead of this torture? Defiantly.

    Just as I was lost in thought, my master had came in. I've had hundreds of them over the years. The first one I can't get out of my head... Ugh.

    I immediately began shaking. I had give in a long time ago an forgot my stay strong ways and cried all the time. That is ,when I had water in me.

    "RELAX! WHY ARE YOU SO SCARED?! WHAT HAVE I DONE TO MAKE YOU SO SCARED?!"

    Beaten me, starved me, let me live with an unknown disease, let me bleed, take liquid and blood out I me for patients of yours...

    My thoughts was interrupted when he boomed"WELL?! IS THERE ANYTHING?!"

    I shook my head furiously. I couldn't tell him or he would go beyond that. Most masters did when I wouldn't answer them but I had to live with it.

    "I WANT YOU TO TALK," he boomed angrily as he slapped and pushed me so I fell off the small bed provided for me. He rushed over and began kicking me while screaming "WELL?!"

    "N-n-no s-sir! Y-you didn't d-do anything," I stuttered out.

    He stopped and smirked proudly"That's what I thought! I have excellent news though!"

    His good news NEVER meant good news. More like fun for him and pain for me.

    I looked at him with a look that said 'go on'.

    He nodded and began to explain what changed my life"Well there is a guy, willing to buy you. I even told him about your disease! He might not help but I don't know. I want you listen to me Lauren..."

    "My name is Taylor," I muttered "Not Lauren. That was the one before me."

    He slapped me and continued"Anyways, he is very dangerous. He has killed several of his slaves from what I heard. He leads them on with this I'm going to save you thing and love and romance and ugh. DO NOT listen and I repeat DO NOT. Okay? He has also been watched and they say he's let a few slaves go. You might get lucky if we don't capture you back."

    I nodded and he pulled me off the floor. I am leaving! I have only been here a month but I've hated it more than anything!

    Well... I always hate my masters.

    I followed him throughout his house and to his car. I hopped in the back excitedly.

    I sighed as a huge house came into view. Rich guy equals stuck up.

    "NOW GET OUT OF MY SIGHTS," he screamed as some butler handed him money.

    I shook my head and got out, wrapping my arms tightly around me and holding my head down.

    The butler smiled at me and I gave him a confused look. Why was he being nice to me?

    I followed him throughout the house and to a room. It was an actual bedroom! Not a room just with a bed and a toilet! My first room since I was seventeen!

    I smiled slightly as I looked around. The bed was huge and the bathroom was better than I could ever imagine. It had all sorts of shampoo and body wash and anything and everything that smelt good.

    The room was blue and the bed was a light purple color with light green circles all around it.

    There was a dresser with a lamp and clothes in it. There was also a closer with clothes every where. There was also several shelves of books, DVDs, CDs, and video games.

    There was a tv with a DVD player and a play station beside it. There wa also a radio nearby plugged into the wall. There was a computer under the window on a desk.

    The window had bright lights shining through and curtains that wee ye same purple as the bed.

    The floors were wood and there was enough room under my bed to hide something... Perfect.

    I didn't realize anyone had walked in until they gave a nervous cough.

    I turned around with wide eyes to see my master. I backed away into a corner. Did I seriously just trap myself?

    I watched as the man just looked at me. Didn't move once or blink I don't think. I nervously got up and went to the bathroom.

    He watched as I walked in. I saw his eyes go wide before I slammed the door. I locked it quickly and jumped in the bath tub.

    I sat there and peeked through a hike in the curtains to see if he was going to come in. I know he wouldn't torture me in here because it was to clean but he could scold me and slap me once or twice.

    "COME OUT THIS INSTANT MISS," I heard the butler scream.

    Why was he screaming at me and not the master? I bet he will get in trouble for that.

    "DON'T SCREAM AT HER CONNOR! SHE IS SCARED! ALMOST AS SCARED AS THE ONE WHO CAME LAST WEEK AND WE ALL KNOW HOW THAT ENDED," a voice screamed. I think it was the masters.

    "Will you please come out? We aren't going to hurt you," he said gently,

    I shook my head furiously until realizing he couldn't see me.

    I gulped and managed out"No."

    "You sound and look just like her," he murmured to himself and I could tell he was shaking his head.

    "Whats your name?"

    "You don't care."

    "I do! Does it happen to be..."

    "IT IS NOT LAUREN," I interrupted.

    I could tell he was shocked"Well that's what the guy told me..."

    "Well he don't know a rats nest from a bees knees," I murmured but I could tell he was surprised.

    "She said that," he murmured to himself.

    "Please come out! I need to know if it's really you!"

    "What do you mean?"

    "Taylor please!"

    "H-how did you know my name?"

    "I know more than your name! I know you have natural green and red hair! I know your favorite color is blue! I know you were bullied in school! I know your father escaped years ago when he was put in jail by your best friend! I know your best friend betrayed you! I know that he is really sorry but he never gave up looking for you. I know he loved you and bought all the slaves he could to find the one and only Trudy the Greats daughter."

    He was crying at the end about the best friend! Why would he cry over me? Why am I so special?

    I opened the door looking out to see him laying on the bed crying in a pillow like a girl and screamed into it a couple times.

    I giggled a little at the sight. That's bad. He will probably punish me for being happy now.

    I backed up with my hand over my mouth.

    "I-I didn't mean to!"

    He let out a soft chuckle"I'm not going to hurt you."

    He wiped his tears away and walked to me.

    I widened my eyes as his arms raised but to my surprise, he hugged me. Why? I don't know but he was warm.

    I stood their shocked and a little embarrassed. I have never had a master who hugged me...

    "Then you haven't had very many good masters."

    I looked up. He read my mind!

    "Yes I did," he chuckled"No I'm not just mind reader but I am a magic elemental."

    Ugh!

    "Is that how you knew my past?"

    "Not really," he said scratching his head.

    Not really? Did I know this man?

    "Yeah you do. Very well actually. I am not surprised you forgot me but I don't know how you could!"

    I shook my head. Why was it so important that I knew him?

    "Come on I will take you to fix that disease of yours."

    I nodded and followed him. Who was he and why was he so familiar?
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    I bet y'all know who it is  don't worry there is a long story to go from here
     
  13. Soo good!! And im glad it wont end here!!!!!!!
    BUMP!!!!
     
  14. Thank you! Lol I have this idea and I want to tell it but I'm not going spill the beans lol sorry I forgot to check spelling before I posted it silly me
     
  15. its fine with me everyone lets some mistakes slide in their stories