This is the sequel to New Girl. Enjoy! It has been a month since the "incident" and Megan is still not talking to me. I don't blame her, I did kill her best friend. I still remember it, like it was yesterday. The look on her face it was surprised and also calm, not in a good way though. I pretty much got the hang of going back to school again, I knew everyone, except for one. His name is Max. I can tell he has some dark secret, one that no one knows about, for now. I am now determined to get it out of him not how I was before though, like how a regular middle-schooler, by annoying it out of him. Please comment and give feed-back. Sry this is short I plan on making the next a little larger.
=) Well, let's see... 1) Add a little more detail. You can never have enough 2) Try to separate your story from your note. Like this. But I was determined to get it out of him ------------------ [Your note here] All in all, it's pretty good
Well new story new character --------------- Hi. My name is Max. My parents used to be the ones I'd called to for help, when 'it' happened. I was in middle school when it happened. My parents were taken away, for , I don't know what! The last this they ever said to me was, "Find your sister, she is in the state of Wisconsin. You will know when you find her. Go to West Bend Middle School. Shenowv has three friends and one of them was lost and has never been found.
Sry I accidently clucked the submit button Continued ----------------- "..... You will have almost every single class with her and her name is Sabrina." We lived in California and it took me almost 5 years to find her but I finally made it to West Bend. It was a pleasant town and it was very open , so to say. My first day was TORTURE!! Through the whole day, I kept trying to find Sabrina but no one was in my any of my classes for more than once. Now it's lunch time. I looked for a group of two, just in case she wasn't here today, but just then someone bumped into me and as soon as I looked up, there she was. My sister. My sister was a tomboy. Just like me but, her eyes. Something about her eyes made me get goose bumps. "Watch where you're going dude! Gees!" "Sorry I'm the new guy." "You better be sorry, so where do plan on sitting?" "I'm not sure, is your table open?" Now I'm sounding desperate. Even I would say no. "Sure, just don't bring any of your friends, or you'll regret it." She then swung at my face. I'd thought I would die!! "You have my word." Not like I had any friends. "Hey you guys. This is the new guy, sound familiar??" "What do you mean??" This should be good. "I was the new girl just two months ago, but sometimes tells me you already knew that." Oops. I think she knows what I think she does. Now I'm really freaked out.
Who is this guy? and why is he so nervous about what I last said?? This guy is hiding something big and I'm involved. "Hey, new guy I never caught your name." "Oh it's Max." "Ok Max, what are you doing at this school?" "My parents wanted me to transfer, they said my last school was to dangerous." That was definitely a big fat lie. No one enters this school without being consulted about the murder last month. "Now anyone at this school knows that is a lie Max. Meet me outside on the other side of the school building. Don't worry I can keep a secret." I giggled a bit, just to remind him that I am an almost regular girl. "Fine, and you're right it does involve you." We all finished eating, except Max. He just sits there eating as slow as possible. What is that guy trying to hide from me! ------ Max's POV I try eating as slow as possible cause I need to find out why my parents would send my sister away, and then tell me to go after her! It's crazy but at least I found her. I get done eating and go to the other side of the school. She kept her word but her other friends were there too. "Ok, now tell me why you really came here." "I came to find you." "What!" Her face went really pale and she fainted. Sabrina then woke up shortly, and started hyper ventilating. When she finally stopped 5 minutes later she replied, " Why did you come looking for me!" She went from pale to red hot red. What did this girl do? "My parents sent me to find you, my sister." "I AM NOT YOUR SISTER!" "Calm down, it wasn't my idea but they sent me not themselves." "My parents died ages ago, how long did it take you to get here?" "About five years." "How old are you now?" "About 16. Why do you ask?" "That's how old I am." ------------------------ you think hes telling the truth??
Sabrina's POV (regular) ------------- Why. Why is he saying that he is my sister? True, we are both about the same height and age but it can't be that we are actually brother and sister. Right? "How are you so sure that I'm the one you're looking for?" "Because my, I mean our, parents told me what you looked like and you match that description." "They called me about a month ago, saying where you were, how many friends you have, and anything else I needed to know." "So you're saying your parents were alive last month, correct?" "Yeah, why?" "Because MY parents died 5 years ago!" "What, no that can't be true." "Well then , that means someone lied to one of us, or we aren't brother and sister." "Do you have any experience with sleuthing? "You bet I do! "And we'll help you do it!" Megan replied. "And how are you guys going to 'help' us?" This time it was Rebecca who answered. "Well you are going to need someone to cover for you guys while you are gone, and maybe help with any research you guys need done." "Let me guess you guys," Max replied gingerly, "you guys never did this?" "Oh we have tons of experience with this type of work," Megan assured him. "Ok then, let's go!" ------------ yeah i might not update often but i will update for u guys