Alice POV- 6 years old - "Daddy! Daddy! I wanna play hide and seek!" I said grinning. "Ok sugarplum." Daddy replied sighing. 'I will hide somewhere daddy won't look!' I thought. "I'll count to 10, and you hide" My dad said covering his eyes, while turning around. I ran far into the woods nearly tripping on a log. I turned and ran even farther as fast as my legs could go. The I stopped and breathed heavily. "Wait..." I said "where am I?". Then I heard my dad. He was very far away. I heard a shuffling noise behind me as I turned around. A man said "I have finally found you..." As I blacked out. Hehe. I was bored so I decided to make a story. I hope you like it!
What Samie said. Also add details, elaborate their feelings. I feel like I gave this tip to you already.. But weave little bits of detail into the story :geek: