Death Romantic Tragedy Murder Haunted Areas/People Yeah…I'm socially disturbed. I do like your poems, but agree with Rani. imI'm UrYour Other than those minuscule grammatical issues your poem is fine
The Night on Street 41 Frightend as I walk this abandoned road Where evil souls lurk Their crude and terrifying lair lies On Street 41 Dark and lonely on this street Where only the moon shines I'm terrified, yet anxious to see what lies On Street 41 As I see the end of this tunnel As refuse to slow down Death gives me it's kiss Making me forever lost, forever bound On Street 41 (I have a feeling I didnt do so good so please give me feedback)
Meh, maybe you should stick with romance, you work better with it. "Night on 41 Street" isn't bad, it's just not as good as I believe you could have done.
LOVE To love and be loved Is as beautiful as the rainbrow after rain For it to be explained to you, my love Must be broken down The L is for life For you love is what keeps me going What makes live on And breathe the same air as you do The O is for the only For I shall love only you And you shall love me With no afair The V is for so very amazing For your love is the one thing That makes my heart make the "thump" And skip beats you cause And finally, the E is for eternity For as I cripple and become fragile I will never forget you For I am yours And you are mine If I could pray For anything on this earth It would be so that we stay together Knowing the true meaning of L-O-V-E
I have a poem of my own _________________________ A street... I live on A couch... I sit upon A table..... I eat on A bed.. I lay my head I hope you LOVED this poem as much as I did. It was really a mind-bender
I got a poem Roses are red violets are blue give me some bacon or ill kill you I hope u like my poem lol